I like it, not that you really need my opinion, but still.

Awwww

I just loved it!

Sweet and simple.

Cya! :)

The banter here is adorable i love it

This is so cute! I love bumble bee! I like how causal the story is. So light and carefree. Very nicely writer. Ima read more of your stories!

Aw, nice ficlet. (: I'm so glad Jazz is alive in here; it really suits the mood of the story, for some reason.

Ratchet/Bumblebee interaction is awesome. I had never really paid it much heed until recently and I love their friendship, and when they're depicted as parent/son or caretaker/ward, I get all mushy! It's so weird yet familiar, gruff but sweet... ;v; They're amazing bots!

Lovely narration style. I thought the characterization was nice too. Other than a slight misspelling in the sentence after the nails on a chalkboard statement, this is a fun read. _

3 I love this story~ The interactions between 'Bee and Ratchet are not only cute, but humorous, and I love the way they subtly express their friendship. This story was not only enjoyable, but inspirational to me! The point-of-view on the relationships between the Autobots aren't often as funny yet still realistic.

Great job and thank you :)

aw thats cute!

you should continue it.

Aww... his was cute :) Awesome job!

Preferring infant sleeping habits to hanging around Jazz? That bot must really be grating on nerves. Cute story.

This is a nice story. It is good to see Ratchet and Bumblebee interacting like friends. This story was really well written.

Aw. That's really cute! I love it!

This is so cute! Very simple and light while not being too vague. I love the interaction between the two bots, especially how they can joke around so easily when they are still partially in battle mode - I really liked the idea of Bumblebee keeping his audios open because he was paranoid. Great job!

Nice little fic. I like your characterisations. :)