Love it! but it needs more details...like facial expressions, more description of surroundings maybe.

had to review again. Best Barbossa story i've ever read. you caught his character amazingly. I also absolutely adore Cap'n Cinders. I hope you will write more Barbossa fics, or a Barbossa/Lucinda backstory. (also, like any superstitious pirate, the fact that you had 13 reviews was beginning to wear on me nerves...)

I like the story.

It needs though, a lot more detail.

You've got the skeleton right.

But you should mention smells, sights, the sky, the sea, the details of the pearl, facial expressions. Feelings.

I think if you add some o' that, it'll be near perfect.

That was so awesome. :D All the updates of it were piling up in my inbox, so I knew I just *had* to read it. And I wasn't disappointed.

Captain Cinders was a great character... not your typical OC. I really liked her.

Keep up the awesome stuff. :)

That was beautiful! Brilliant! Wonderful!

~Chip

I love your ending! 'And Mr. and Mrs. Barbossa lived piraty ever after'. I loved every minute of your a continuation? And thank you for mentioning me. *sniffles* I feel so loved! LOL jk. BYE!

Aw my gawd, this story is so cute XD! Naw, i mean i really really like it! Barbossa Storys are quit rare.. Great stuff, cant wait for the next update!

No! Stupid Davy! lol. Great chapter though! :)

hahaha this is an awesome fanfic _V

I like the bickering between barbossa and jack!

It's clothes, not close...Good story though! Keep it up! Just watch the spelling mistakes.

I like it, it is well writen, and intertainig, you managed to capture Barbossa who in my opinion is very difficult. Intresting charectors and plot makes your story enjoyable. :)

lol great story :]

really good! can't wait to see where it goes! and I totally agree with Alani there's not enough Barbossa romance stories!

update soon!

A Barbossa romance! There's just not enough of these in the world and he's usually paired up with Elizabeth *shudders* good work. Keep it coming.