It's been...literal years that i've been following this story. Anytime i felt down in the dumps i could count on this fic to literally cheer me up as soon as i read the first line. I had to make an account so i could actively comment and let you know that your fic is constantly on my mind. It's made its way to my day to day life? It's become an inside joke because i couldn't help myself and have basically given a play by play about it to my friend group.

I hope you're doing well! I just wanted to leave a small message because while i'm sitting at home sick during this troubling time this fic of course came to mind and i'm immediately laughing again So thank you!

I know it's been six years but please don't give up on this story!

I know it's been 5 years but please, please, please update this soon! Don't give up on this amazing piece of fiction. It's truly incredible and I love reading every chapter!

Still love this fanfic. It never gets old. So I was wondering... Will you ever write another chapter? Or are we to imagine their Disneyland trip all by ourselves? Would love to hear from you! Xox

Hello there :D

idk if I am the only one but you have another reader from germany now. I am at the moment at chapter 2 but I already had to laugh so hard because your descriptions where so accurate xD I could not believe that you are not German at all when you wrote that.

The only thing that is probably slightly off is the reference to hitler and WW2. At least I would never ever use any of that to describe my home country nor be glad about it.

Hell even the faked accent sounded sooooo damn precise xD most germans have a hard time with english pronounciation but the way you described it was exactly how most of us would speak.

I'll review again when I get to later chapter

God, I loved it when Leon did the hail hitler sign to symbolize Germany! It was so funny! XD and the way Cloud got happy because he knew what danke meant, and the whole "are you my mommy" note...

I can so imagine Zack going around yelling "bathroom" as if talking to a mentally challenged old man, hehe!

Oh squall!

For nostalgia's sake...first thing I did upon waking up Christmas morning was read the Christmas chapter. I shall always love this fic!

i would just like you to know that this is my ABSOLUTE FAVORITE FANFICTION OF ALL TIME like holy jeez. i may not be totally be into this fandom anymore but DAMN THIS IS THE GREATEST FANFICTION I HAVE EVER READ ;v; and i'm really sad that there isn't more to it! omg
ugh ugh ugh i laughed so much at the wittyness of some of the lines wow ugh i love this fanfiction and i love you!
goodnight!

Oh my gods! Please continue this fic. I'm sobbing right now cause you haven't updated and I want to keep reading this awesome story. One if the best ones! Especially Leon's prayer, I was cracking up on that. XD please update soon I'm begging! T-T 5/5 stars!

Hope you update soon, take care!

I really liked this story...alright, loved. I really want to ask you to finish it, but after reading your notes I assume that would be a list cause...also, the fact that it was last updated in 2010 supports that. But if you ever do consider coming back, just know that you have a relatively huge anonymous audience out here wishing terribly for more. ;) please finish, even if it's the trip to DW, getting back in the car, arriving at the hotel and sleeping "happily ever after".

Also I would love to be a beta reader for you if you ever crank out anything else ;)

KOTW

This is SAD! Been around 8 months ago since I read this and even in my worst state this make me laugh every-single-time. MORE SEX MORE SEX MORE SEX Leon and Cloud together drawn me to this story, and I'm grateful for it. I'm still having the lulz for it, please continue someday, please -w-

This story so far is hilarious! If possible, please update soon!

what an enjoyable fic. I can't help but laugh at all the funny scenes playing in my head as i read each chapter. U are an outstanding writer. A couple of errors in spelling here in there but they're acceptable considering u write in incredible lengths per chapter. I doubt u'd wanna go over for spelling errors after ur done writing over 40 pages or something. :D

i am disappointed though that its been too long since ur last update. I wanna know what happens neeeeexxxxtttt!

Please dont abandon this fic. It would be a shame if u lose interest. Let the number of reviews help motivate u to finish it! :]

Ahahahah alright I'm done. _

I really like this, it has a crack ish feel to it but at the same time it's actually completely plausible. I've seen this fic floating about actually but I've never been in the mood for reading when I have.

Judging from the Updated date this work isn't exactly one of your top priorities, and it's a shame to be honest.

:) Thanks for posting! And well done on getting 300 reviews.