Beautiful. Compelling. I love this so much. It was so sad.

How the bloody 'ell did I miss this?I was just on today and looking through my faves,and I saw that you wrote a new story.

This is so sad.I love his are a very talented writer.

BTW,I like Craig as Craig much better than Craig as Jerry Jax :)

Oh my god. This was so deep, and so well written. I love it! Please continue to write stories like this.

Glad to see you posted a new story. I like that your notes said that Jerry/craig are not neccesarily the same person. For some reason that makes Craig more interesting to me if he is not carrying the weight of the odd make-him- Jerry storyline.

As far as writing goes, I thought this line was wonderful

She was quickly becoming an extension of his person-an appendage he could not do without.

Love this phrase

blood-drenched Natasha

Love this too

Glasses and a mess of curls-she made studious incredibly.

AS always, I am very impressed with your writing. It makes me want to be a more thoughtful and careful writer.

I thought the voice you gae Craig was so much deeper, and more finely crafted than Gh has managed to do.