God bless Walter

Wonderful story! I am so glad Siler, Walter and Burke got important roles.

Great story, liked the action and the OCs.

Will we get to find out more about Burke in another story? I liked him-also gives an interesting "in" into Jack's life before the SGC!

This is an excellent story. Characters right on, good plot, great descriptions, I love it! I love the fact that you brought in Burke as an assist. All we needed was Harry and the gang would all be there.

Jack retired huh? Yeah, whatever. Of course he has the makings of a great career as a PI. With his connections he could be downright dangerous. Of course, that's what we love about Jack. He IS downright dangerous.

Great work. Looking forward to more from you.

Excellent story. I'm a confirmed Danny whumper so I particularly loved that. I also loved how you included so many characters that we see very little of. I loved how you use Burke also - they did such a good introduction of him for Evolutions Part 1 and 2 and then we never saw him again. So thank you for that. The story started off wonderful and captivating and definitely kept my attention the whole time. I thoroughly enjoyed it and am now off to read the tie-in story. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!

Great Story. I love that Walter And Siler was in it. You do write incredible syories and you capture the characters so well.

Thanks

Good story. Glad I looked it up. Now for the next one. :)

awesome story. seriously one of the best I've read. the characters' voices were perfect and the story was well paced.

great story, looking forward to those tie-ins, particularly any of a s/j nature :)

i love this story. Send word when the tie-in's are posted and where please.

Oh does that mean more possible Burke stories? Lol.

Nice lil epilogue finished it off nicely. I enjoyed the whole story it was excellent.

Looking forward to reading more of your genius work! Lol.

Love Jack and Burke, what a great mix :)

Damn straight they will! Lol.

That was funny, bless em. Daniel's awake and SG-1 are all together. Perfect! Lol.

You caught us on that one. Like the ending nicely rounded it off. So Sam might come home to find a note on the table 'Gone Hunting' from him and know it's not the local deer he's hunting. Nice one. look forward to the tie-in stories and thanks for sharing.

Aw... Nice ending! I luved the last sentence: how right! I'll wait for your other stories with impatience. Thanks for this great ride!

Aw! I loved that last part with Danny Boy! That was great ending!