really crap

That "Whoa, she's hot!" made the end on that chapter. It's brilliant! I love it. Finish! Please? ... I'd get down on my knees and beg but someone might get the wrong impression, ne? *wink*

Good going so far. I want to know what happens next.

lol, looks like fun and i take it silence is like whistler? yeah? cool because i liked him. anyways keep it up and write more - pickles (katy)

Interesteing!