Where the fuck is the next chapter!?

my passive aggressive reply is that it's my story (from 10 years ago at that) and I don't care. Lol \_(ツ)_/

Ok I just gotta say this. His name is CAPTAIN EDWARD TEAGUE! Not Teague Sparrow!

Awwwww, I'm glad everybody's all right. :) This is a very cute story. Where's the next chappie?

I really like this story. I keep wondering though,Is Elizabeth going to HAVE a baby before the story ends or is she just going to find out she Pregnant or is there going to be no mention of kids anywhere? Hmmm

That was a BEAUTIFUL chapter! Wonderfully written. I loved it! :)

I liked it too, wasn't really corny :) update soon, great job as always by the way. Oh and I loved all the discription, I could really see Jack :)

can't wait!

!¡ Pleaassseee uppddaatteee D:

AH What an evil cliffhanger! You have to update RIGHT NOW! lol

I was so happy when I came back from my vacation & found a new chapter from you :D

This is such an awesome story. I can't wait to read more! :)

Now that Jack is hurt I'm panicking here...if you don't update I kill you!

really good! please update soon!

wtf! don't leave us hanging like that write moreeee!

Wow! This is AMAZING! Please update!

ahahaa the coconut tree thing is funny :D

i love this story enjoyed reading it.. no criticism except that maybe you should go on the describe what they do in bed.. thats sounds wrong but i mean in a passionate way and stuff lol, i love reading about their deep passion.. i want them to be together so bad :( why cant they see they are TOW PEAS IN A POD .. hes handsom shes bonnie.. they should marry.. lol

anyway great story .. awsome ! :P

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Hi there, I know its been a while since you ve updated this story... is there any hope for a next chapter? *is giving you the puppy dog eyes* please