I recently read this story on HDA and.. Wow! Who would have thought..? :D You have a great imagination, Nomi! I loved it! Amazing story! Just wonderful! And it is beautiful in so many ways! So many great moments! :)

Hey, by the way, where are you?

Very beautiful story. I enjoyed it very much.

Wow... I have to say, that is one of my favourite Hardy Boy's stories I have ever read. Firstly, it was really well written, and secondly, I loved the story line! And the characters! And the plot! And the story! You... Probably get my point. But, yeah, I adore this story, and I can't stop grinning now I've finished it... XD

Hey Glad to see this on teh HDA site. Where are u BTW? Hope u arent sick or something. Hope u have a good vacation.

Wonderful, spectacular, amazing story. I'm sad it ended though. Fantastic ending, this is one of my favorite stories. I really enjoyed it. Amazing work. :0)

Oh, wow, amazing chapter. I adore this story! I'm glad he's marrying Jana.

Hahaha, Joe actually told the truth? Lol, I can't wait to see what he did. I'm gonna go read it now. Great chapter!

That was great Jolly! I was not expecting that ending. Wow. I have never heard of the Seraphims so i had no idea what to expect. Glad i read it. You're a magnificent writer. Very imaginitive. Thanks for the time out of our real world and worries for a little while. I have enjoyed it immensely.

Good finish. Hey you mean to say you have a whole series of this kind of stuff that I donmt know about. WHERE can I find it. PLease tell me, now, now , now. BTW, there was a bloomer in the Epi 1Where Frank is thinking abt his being "the girlfriend of vampyre-hunter Jana Van Helsing.". Girlfriend?

Anyways, let me know where I can read mre of your stuff. And the Best for Alien. (That's a hint, just in case you didnt get it, Heh Heh!)

“BUT, enough about me for now, Frank.”

Somehow, the way Joe says that had all my warning instincts on red alert.

“I think there is someone you need to talk to…” Joe tells me as he pushes me towards Jana.

How the heck did he know?

I note that Jonah is also doing the same to Jana, who is clearly trying, like me, to find a way out of this. My eyes narrowed. I see now that there is some sort of conspiracy here.

“Go on, Jana… and we’ll be back later…”

I look on approvingly as Jana gives her younger brother a glare that… well, if looks could kill, that was it.

Suddenly Joe leans close to me and whispers in a serious tone, “Frank, you must ask her about the bonding…”

What the?

Then in a louder voice, Joe announces, “Hey Jonah, I think its time we really get to know each other better…”

And they all left me and Jana alone at the top of the cliff.

XD. I loved Joe and Jonah in this scene. Lol. This story is seriously amazing. I love every spectacularly wonderful word. I can't wait for more. Update soon, please!

I've said it once, I've said it twice... and I'm gonna say it again...

*GLEE!*

That chapter left me felling all happy and tingly! Head to toe tingles! How classic is it of Joe to walk smack dab into trouble when he's just about to be rescued... and Frank and Jana? LOVE IT! I adored how Adam got to go "home".

I can't wipe this silly grin off my face! My cheeks are starting to hurt...

Oh Wow! What else can I say. that was very beautiful.

So good. Wonderfully so.

Is there going to be more? I really enjoyed the chapter. And I love the story, it's truly one of my favorite Hardy story. In concluson, wow, amazing job. You're seriously a terrific writer. Nice work!

GLEE!

"I find myself sparing a thought for my poor parents. I was home for barely 12 hours, and was gone again."

-I agree! Poor Fenton & Laura! I hope Frank gets back before morning, else they're going to go insane!

"Imagine my surprise when I realized that I had moved faster and further than I anticipated! Now, what does that mean?"

-My question exactly!

"Soon, we are surrounded by a dozen vampyres. Given the fact that we are currently at an isolated spot on the cliffs overlooking the bay, I am not hopeful of a police cruiser coming pass. In all honestly, it is not even nice of me to wish for one to come by. But wish I do. I am not exactly in the mood to be nice at the moment."

-I giggled a lot when I read this, which makes me glad again that I'm the only one in the office this afternoon.

"“Here.” The voice though soft carries through the night breeze.

My heart lifts. That is Joe. I watch him move out from the shadows with Adam behind him."

-WOO HOO! *does the happy-that-joe-is-alive dance*

"I feel suddenly anxious. I turn to look at Joe. He seems unperturbed.

That is a good sign, right?"

-Yes, trust in Joe, that's a good idea.

"One feminine hand entwines her fingers with mine on my left, and another hand firmly holds on to my right. I hold on to both tightly. I have a woman who loves me with all her heart, and a brother who loves me with his whole soul. What more can a man want in his life? I will not disappoint them."

-GLEE! Love, love, love it!

The rest of the chapter I would totally quote here to comment, but it'd be too long then. Let me just say this then, I am glad I am the only on in the office (again) because the end of this chapter has be bawling like a baby! Fabulous! Absolutely fabulous!

And Miss Jolly, no worries on the other one. When I need my Jolly-Frank-Angst-Fix I'll just reread this one!