I really like your use of vocabulary. You have a real flare with communicating your thoughts affectively.

I have to agree with the first comment. This is a lovely story and you have so captured Steerpike and Fuschia's realtionship brilliantly!

You have done Peake proud. ;)

wow, i dun even know what gormenghast is, or who the ppl in your fic are, just wandered around and stumbled upon your fic, love the language so much, the words and story are so soft.

You've captured the style of writing well, the way Fuchsia is repelled and attracted to Steerpike at the same time...intense and lovely.