I love it when one author write for more than one of my selected fandoms, lol. I have three of your fics open right now and I'll review each one.

He remembers that song she loves that felt oddly out of place, clashing up against the words he had to say. - That song is the sole reason I read and reviewed "Commas and Ampersands", lol.

He remembers apologizing for last summer. - That bit, in the scene, it kills me. God, he sounds so resigned when he says it :(

So they drive a lot. Rising gas prices and carbon-dioxide emissions don't bother a movie star's son, and so the Xterra sees a lot of miles that summer as they drive up and down the PCH with his classic rock and her emo bands blaring out of the radio, the windows down and the wind in her hair, the sun in her eyes, and she's gorgeous.

And he's comfortable. - No clever comment about this, it's just awesome.

Sometimes he talks to Mom and pretends she can hear him—mostly he screams at her for leaving him. - :(

Duncan should know that Logan needs him, should show up at the house and act like nothing happened. That's what a real friend would do. - Agreed. Totally agreed. Duncan was a douche for not being there for Logan.

and it's (almost) enough to erase the bitter sting of the memory that she actually could have thought, even for a moment, that he hurt Lilly (part of him knows that that memory will haunt him forever and he'll spend his whole life trying to prove her wrong). - As much as I love Veronica, that really got to me. I mean, it's Logan. There's no way he could have killed Lilly and she should have known that. I also think you've got his feelings on the matter down perfectly. I can see it bothering him for a long, long time.

Trina moves back to the Grande, and he's alone in that house. - I like that he consideres it to be "that" house. Puts a distancing feel on it.

I'm a big fan of catchy opening lines, but your heartbreaking closing lines are amazing. As are all of the one-liners in this. great job :)

oh, it was so sad. but oh so rewarding. a great look into logan and how he doesn't actually go through this whole thing in a deze, he knows perfectly well what's going on. oh, and can i take this opportunity to say i LOVED what you did with the parentheses and italics. I read and reread them to make sure i was getting the message. and no where did you mess up with a tense change or an extraneous word. lovely.

Wonderful. I know that Logan is screwed up, but you know, I can't help it - I loved those two kids together. You did a marvelous job with this.

"...he’s never wanted anything in his life the way he wants to protect her." This bit just clutched my heart.

You are very aware of the characters foibles, subtelties and physicalities.

It's beautiful and graceful and heartbreaking. Your take on the 61 days was spot on. Thanks.

Wow, you really captured that summer. I'd kind of thought I'd never read a good VM fic again, but you just proved me wrong. You did an amazing job portraying Logan's thoughts and emotions from perhaps the most turbulent time in his life. I really enjoyed it.

That was great, I loved it. We really did get royally ripped off. I mean we get a little LoVe action at the end of Season 1, miss all of the summer and come back to find she's with Duncan (thinking what the hell happened over summer to make that happen?) then finally at the very end of Season 2 they get back together only to come back on Season 3 completely screwed up again (all problems that would eventually lead to them breaking up, how many times?) So this was great. I think you held true to what it would have been like. Great job!

~Mac

I just rewatched the season 1 finale and I totally agree that they skimped on the summer. This fic is great at filling in the blanks.

wow i liked it at first i wasnt going to finish it but i am glad i did it was awesome

Wow - this is a great story, and you paint Logan as so unbelievably vulnerable that the end just kills me. Even though I knew what was coming! I love the scene where they sneak into the Kane's pool.