| Reviews for One Step Closer |
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  Guest chapter 36 . 7/1/2019 Loved this so much, wonderful work! |
| Guest chapter 19 . 7/1/2019 This story is so beautiful and emotional, so good. This chapter will always, always make me cry. |
 foxyxjack chapter 9 . 6/4/2018 You're such a good writer,seriously I feel like i'm in another world when I read your are just so perfect and realistic. There's only one thing that I didn't like about your stories is babies. I mean there are so many babies and I never imagined Jack having so much kids, to be honest.I loved daddy Jack in season six so much but I still prefer Jack having kids with Kate,not someone else. Anyway this story already is one of my favorite stories,I hope you decide to come back to writing Jack/Jate you. |
| Guest chapter 36 . 3/25/2018 One of the best things I've ever read in this site. Awesome Jate story. Thank you! |
| Guest chapter 7 . 9/11/2017 My poor baby Jack, what happened to him |
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/11/2017 That was so hot |
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2017 Wow first I thought Barbie was Kate. But I have to say it Jack/Barbie sex was hot |
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/4/2017 All the LOST feels today. Jate all the way! I love them forever and I really love this beautiful story! |
| foxyjack chapter 36 . 5/21/2017 Firstly it was a great story,You really described them very Jack reminded me "Through the Looking Glass Jack" I mean he's depressed he's drinking again etc. My favorite story of you is absolutely "When it's become too much" but I have to say it this story has the best smut scenes ever ! I mean they are so IS FUCKING INCREDIBLE ,you have no idea how many times I have said "I want Jack Shephard in my life,specially IN MY BED" while I was reading this story lmao |
| sandyba chapter 36 . 12/12/2016 Brilliant writing,thanks for this emotional and intense story. |
| kika chapter 36 . 9/20/2016 A beautiful love story... Thanks for writing! I loved it! |
| mlo chapter 36 . 7/26/2016 Pretty intense,a beautiful fiction. Thanks for sharing. |
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/17/2016 One of the best Jate AU Fic ever...simply wonderful... |
| Guest chapter 36 . 7/17/2016 One Step Closer one of the best things I have ever read... You portray Jack's POV in a wonderful way... Great job! Thanks! |
| marish chapter 36 . 7/17/2016 Wonderful fiction:) I enjoyed it! Jack is a beautiful family man here,and Kate is great too. Your stories are ever lovely,sexy,sweet and romantic. |
