Simply loved it

forced

I’ve been reading this story for the last few days and can I say how much I’ve fallen in love with your words and characters. Brilliant job!

Hermione certainly didn’t deserve to be sent to Azkaban in the fanfic - even though she has done a rash thing. Worst of all? Ron did eventually come to her rescue! He took time away from his missing daughter’s case to help her! And now everyone bands together against him? When he’s been put through the wringer over and over and over by the woman he loves? When Hermione broke his heart not once, not twice, but three times?! He’s supposed to get over it just like that? And of course everyone in the reviews is like “I really hate Ron right now, he’s being so self-centred” or “Ron’s so stupid! Poor Hermione!” just because Precious Princess got sent to Azkaban, so that makes her pain more valid than Ron’s for some reason? She’s not the one whose child has been kidnapped!

And how callous Harry and co are when they all turn against Ron in that last chapter. I wanted to punch every single one of them in the face. Instead of being glad Ron is finally reunited with his daughter, they just blame him for not doing “more” for Hermione? Well he did came to the trial and saved her arse in the end so why are they angry? Uuugh… I love this fic, really, but that chapter was a massive let-down what with every character and their mother blaming Ron for his emotions and absolving Hermione of all fault.

This was a fantastic spin out.
Really hope you continues your history and Ron don nedd 11 years tosend his daugther to Hogwards ant meet Hermione again.

Question here is?
Ron still loving Hermione?
His face said NO...but
What is the only magic device Rons cant lying it?
Great man Dumbeldore. All us sometime, need to find the way back.

Really? Really did she fucker him was great mistake? I cant belive it

Hermione showing her heart to Ron's baby was ans absolute master piece.

Thiis is good. "Ron is unpractical" ... Hermione said.
Harry WAS de umpractical one. He was good ans effective under press but he has always terrible planing.
Was she practical? Ummm, she was good planing for long time but sometimes she forgot the more essencials thinks. She was already to an emergency leaving with all thinks she can imagine to need, clothes, books, maps, tent... but what about FOOD?
The practical, the real practical, the one didnt forget a broomstrick to return from the chamber of secrets was Ron, The one to think in Shell Cottage was Ron.
Anyway is interesting how you present the Hermione 's feelings to Ron. Make a lot to give intensive to argument.

Well. This is a strange moment to me. Right nkw I dont know if the history is complete or not and this is really bad.
The work have an incredible emotional range. There are a lot ofmfeelings crossing fire between diferents characters and that is one of the secrets to do an outstanding work. So, if I have in my hand a completed or in progres work with this intensity Ill be really happy and enjoying with a new writer I didnt know before else, and this is a fail work, I will be plenty disappointed and I will cursing or bad luck for long, long... long time.
Still my hope up.

We have an interesting point here. Very smart I must say.
Ron was the first to be crecruited by Aurors. That Ron selt afirnation ownself made a interesting diferent in his temperament. I supouse Hermion leaving had a lot of weight in his decision. He wanted to probe himself. To probe he cas capable to be a life without her. An estupid thinking in my sight because he left behind this heart and soul.

it has taken me over a month to finish this, and holy shit was it work it. Even if you never continue this, you certainly left in a perfect place. It's content

I love this story,when is it gonna get complete

I love this story,when is it gonna get complete

expected something more sensible or tragic