Great story so far and I know this is an AU story but Carter was a Major during 'Shades of Gray'.

You need to improve you're grammar and punctuation, it's painful to read (especially need to work on difference between there, their, they're). However, the story line has potential, the ending needs more time though.

the ending was too abrupt, not one issue was dealt with, there was no SJ ship, it ended in a way that makes me think that you were either bored of this fic and just wanted it over and done with, no matter how, or you lost the rest of the fic somehow and decided not to bother writing it again and just post what you had; cause it looks like a chapter ripped in two, with the other half missing.

That was a bit of a sudden ending, to me not all the issues were dealt with, what happened to Sam's recovery? there was plenty of room for some ship there!

you can't leave it hanging there. maybe a sequel?

It was a good idea to bring Cassie in.

it was fine.

it's a good surprise.

it's gotten better

gotten better

liked the ending but was hoping sam would make jack grovel a bit more..oh well look forward to your next story.

it's ok though kind of short for a chspter

Oh this is good.

cute sort ending.

LOL! Good boy, Jack. No more secrets ;)