tobi is not obito

I liked the ending, the Jiraiya and Tobi talk. But why did Dei have to die...

please dont make this a one shot :''( i really like this and i would love for you to continue this and make it a chapter story :) Pweasssssss :)

Hm, not only an IruKo writer but non-evil Tobito! I, to put it simply, love this. How you have that he's Jiraiya's spy, and that the explosion returned his memory... "spoil sensei's kid," ha! And nephew, I imagine, is Itachi...

My favorite part was Sasuke's "Trial" I love the way you wrote that! Excellent job and keep up the good work!

Nice.

Ok. That was admittedly an emotional speech. I like it. But, one question: Are you going to add onto this? If not, can I try and take over and write a story from this?

I look forward to your response.

Forever Signed in Blood,

Slayer End

Pretty good! Tobito theory rules and the story did also! so keep a-writing please! ... other stories.

Wow! this is good! i HATE sasuke alot but i even feel sorry for him... WTF!

Hmm... that was one of the more interesting Tobito fics I've read! Good job! I would love to read more! XD

Cool, a Tobito now where to find the Madara is Tobis?

*grins* Loved this! I HATED that Sasuke got away with murder more than once! Akatsuki might be made up of criminals, but they deserve better than this! If they should die, they should die fighting! And they only should be killed, IF the other ninjas have no choice! I doubt Sakura enjoyed killing Sasori, she was left with no choice. Shikamaru only went after Kakazu and Hidan to avenge Asuma, no other reason. All I know of Deidara and Sasuke's encounter was there was some fight. And Deidara blew himself up with a bomb. But WHY does Deidara hate Sasuke so much? Have they met before or something? I hate the fact that Tobi is evil! I wanted Tobi to be Obito, and react, to Deidara's death! They were partners! I thought Tobi would care that someone killed his partner/friend into cold blood! By the way, EXACTLY why did Itachi kill the entire clan and leave Sasuke alive? Kinda suspicious...If you're planning to wipe out an entire clan, NEVER leave ANY survivors! That is a major bad idea, and look what happened! Sasuke left his own village, and blew a hole into his team-mate's chest! I'm shocked Tsunade's NOT screaming for Sasuke's death! Naruto IS lucky to be alive! If I was Kyubi, I would do my best to find a way to tell the Godaime EXACTLY how Naruto got that wound! I'm betting that Kyubi had a tough time healing that wound, since the chidori was designed as an assassian techinque! And we all know what happened to Haku, when Kakashi used that techinque on Zabuza! Haku died when he took the blow meant for Zabuza!

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great job on the fic shun-chan the main problem with it that i noticed is that it was kinda hard to picture i was kinda confused i had to read one of the sentences a few times until i got it so just work on the clarity other than that story-line was awsome adjectives were good and spelling and grammer was correct (as far as i can tell and remember) so you did a realy good job btw just so you know at the forums im meavoan.

Tobi's a good man. I support both theories that this story represents! Good job with it, too!

This fic really touched my heart... *tears*