I cannot believe the amount of wordage wasted in this story on...camp. A summer camp. So. Much. Skimming.
Gaagh.
It's a summer camp - so the fuck what?
Gaagh.
ENOUGH ALREADY.

I planned to write that this story certainly deserves more reviews and favourites. Was loving it. Until the moment Harry and Hermione were made siblings. They never were and never acted like siblings. It was always Ron- Hermione and Neville-Hermione whose actions spoke like brother-sister. Lost all interest then.

Pleas write a longer sequel. This is a really good book.

I was really enjoying this fic till this chapter. You fell in the perfect Hermione trap and made her OOC, just to keep her close to Harry.
Hermione would first question how below average Harry outdid her in every subject, she would then accuse him of cheating because he found a way to have more time to study then his peers.
She would also try to reason with him when it came to Dumbledores actions as she blindly follows authority figures and basically worships Dumbledore.
I would have preferred it if you’d maybe distanced her and then somehow made her redeemable by making her realize that without Harry Potter she has a very lonely future in the wizarding world. By making her Sirius’ bastard just made the story 10 times worse.
Either way, thank you for sharing your work. At least I got to enjoy 10 chapters.

You had almost made me like petunia there.

Another thing that needs to be addressed, where the fuck is Ilvermorny as far as I know it is an American Magical School, so when I saw that Ilvermorny was not there, I was surprised but that is probably because it might not have been said to exist at the time, and I am reviewing this almost 13 years later.

I find that the author cannot decide between $ or galleons as they write both. If the author ever reads this review, you just have to identify the amount of money as galleons i.e 2 galleons. Not $2 galleons or what you wrote. I like your story though.

I remember loving this fic years ago, and I'm not even that interested in HP currently but wanted to come back and revisit it. This story is just as riveting as I remembered and the perfect pick me up while I'm struggling with working from home motivation

Maggie Smith forever.

Well. That happened fast. I figured that list would last him through most of the story, and he's basically finished it in three chapters. Respec.

loved this fic!

Okay, seeker camp is pretty cool mostly because of all the familiar faces but Harry is too perfect at everything. That's just not cool. I like him being awesome and taking his studies seriously and flipping the tables on Dumblydore but winning ever match against the best and ever duel as a 16 year old, that's just a bit much.

Such a great week. I'm glad that Harry had fun and made so many new friends. The points was a good idea and the posters. It'd be so cool to have posters or photos like that. I'm assuming elves popped unseen taking the photos and sometimes I wished I had a personal photographer for my life. Speaking of, when Harry was purchasing his photos it said he was on team 1 but he was team 3 I remember because his # was 37. I think there was also another time when it said he was on team 1.
I'm excited for the changes Harry is making. I just wonder what galleon to dollar conversion you're imagining because I've heard 5,7,or even 40 pounds to a galleon and the salaries mostly sound good consider on a 1:7 galleon to pound rate, I'd make 570 galleons a month but how could the receptionist only make
$75? that's not even $450 USD and no one can live on that. Also, as much as I enjoyed this I don't know if I'll be as interested if you do another whole week for Seeker camp. Please just summarize it. Thank you for writing.

This sounds amazing! I'm so happy that Harry has made such big changes to this camp in so few days. I love when Harry whips the wizarding world into shape even if it's just a small place like The Farm. I LOVE all the new ideas. Thank you so much. Also, Maggie Smith? You made Dame Maggie Smith a part time counselor? Lol

You forgot ilvermorny