Yes...just yes. _

love it!

So the first part was pretty hot (who wouldn't want to watch Squall being seduced?) and then the second part just had me cracking up- I thought both were great, if for different reasons.

Definitely no disappointment with part 2.

When do you continue? I sometimes come just to look if you wrote the story further...its so hot...and I would love to know what happens next between, Seifer and Irvine...

can't remember if i reviewed this. but if i did, it's very kinky still! XDDD

Had me giggling once more. BTW How is the wedding between our favorite FF pair in the Magic Universe you made?

o.o the long awaited next chapter. Love it! yaoi next chappy? Yush? ;3

I must say, it was nice to get some closure :-)

And I thought it very charming that Seifer was following his script faithfully and nothing went as planned...and it turned out all's well at the end! LOL :-)

Excellent! :-)

I swear you've written this so well you sound like a pro yourself. Seifer and Irvine are a bit lengthy but nevertheless still a hot pairing. keep writing .

that was really good. i really really hope you decide to write a sequel.

HEY! WHAT HAPPENED BETWEEN IRVINE AND SEIFER? I really wanna know. Did the seduction work?

*chuckles*

Wow, that was pure fun!

Thanks for such an awesome stress relief~

PS Please, read more magazines before you go to bed. Getting ideas for writing is better than having no ideas whatsoever. Writer's block sucks.

Such a good story! I love how Zell takes charge, and Seifer & Zell's roles are kind of reversed. Now what ended up happening between Seifer & Irvine, anyway? Hmm...

i really wasn't a huge fan of Squall and Zell pairings... but after reading this... i... think i might make an acception! good work, kiddo! 3 well, um... i better go take a shower now.

whoa so hot, naughty and wickedly fun, good job