Another great chapter. ) Plz update soon.

However, there is one grammar mistake that is very frequent. Instead of using an apostrophe 's', you write 'is'. While "it's" is the contracted form of "it is", that is not the case for possession.

ex) you wrote: "the demon is chakra...", this was meant to be: "the demon's chakra", the chakra is owned by the demon, thus you should use an apostraphe s, using 'is' doesn't make sense.

While I really like this fic, there were a few issues with the timeline & common sense of this particular chapter.

"A year had passed since the demon fox had been killed..."
"for naruto this year would be different"
"Like every year they cornered him in a dark and empty alley"

This makes no sense. The 1st sentence talks about the Kyuubi having been killed only the yr before, making Naruto 1 yr old. The other 2 talk about there having been more than just 1 yr before the current. If he is 1 yr old then how did they corner a newborn in a dark & empty alley the yr before let alone any of the yrs before that when he hadn't even been born yet. Its also incredibly rediculous for him to be only 1 and capable of what he did or at the very least capable of such good speech. It can't be due to the time room, because while it makes sense for physical things, I don't understand how that could work for intellectual things such as learning how to talk, because 1 hr of learning how to talk is 1 hr of learning how to talk, I don't believe that can be excellerated unless something like the kage bunshin is used & he didn't know it before the genin exam.

Also:
you called a senzu bean, a hermit bean
you called the 3rd Hokage, the fourth
Saiyain isn't the correct spelling, its Saiyan

there are actually quite a few other small errors in all the chapter so far, that show that you do not proofread or have anyone beta your fic. You tend to use the wrong word and mispell others.
Ex) you used "thought" when you meant "taught".
& Its spelled "Mourn" not "morn"

Youre story is brilliant, nothing wrong with how you've set this up my friend. It also shows where I'm lacking also.

But I do think deathrunner might need to rebeta, since there are still lots of is, when it should 's or s at the end of words.

Over all, I look forward to the continueation, it's getting interesting. XP

im sorry ill review dont eat my soul... its a damn good chap... i hope you wont wait too loong to update the next few ... ja ne

freaking awesome as ever..i hope you update this one soon... its always good to read this..

That was nice. Keep it up.

Well.. This has the potential to be an awesome story, but you kind of make Naruto suck, even with all that power.. Plus you really need a beta, your grasp on English isn't so great.

Dear Archangemon

I would like to know what is happening in regards to Potential chapter 8.

Now if it’s a simple problem like Beta’s then I guess I’d like to offer my services, but only in regards to ‘Potential’, I have no interest in any other stories but ‘Potential’ as it’s one of the few good and probable in my eyes the best so far, Dragonball Z and Naruto crossover out there.

Yet despite this, I do fell that there are several problems with the story in regards to how the powers have been portrayed, but its your story and I try just to keep my opinions to myself as I haven’t had what it takes yet to write a fan-fiction I’m happy with. I am too finicky.

Plus I guess problems are about to happen when mixing two complete different universes, with different rules and such.

I mean Naruto-verse has things like chakra coils, chakra coil development, chakra reserves, elemental manipulation and form manipulation and a whole lot of more. Almost as bad as Hunter x Hunter, now that’s strict.

While Dragonball-verse it just raw power and intense training and no mechanics behind the powers except you have ki, you focus and power up augment your speed, strength, stamina and durability and training and sparring sharpens your reflexes and focus some more and you fire huge ki blasts that destroy cities, mountains, moons and planets or planet destroying tyrants and monster. Plus they mainly get away with it because most training happens off-screen and most of the characters are either mystical slug/reptilian race or super powerful warrior race.

If you’d like I’d be more then happy to discuss, Naruto and the Dragonball-series, and hopeful come up with helpful input from a different point of view or at the most constrictive criticism with different point of view.

Now I can’t promise I’ll be the best beta, but I will do what I can to meet dead lines and do my job right, my spelling and grammar isn't perfect but heck I'm studying fitness not English at college.

this is getting ridiculous.i'm afraid i must demand to become your beta

yo your storys good a few problems though ar were a phrase lik "the man's scroll" you type it as "the man is scroll" and you puot a space in "shinobi" making it "shin obi".

very good plotline, but you need to work on your spelling: "shook" not shock, "damn" not deam, "Naruto's" not Naruto is

hey awesome story i haven't read a good dragonballz crossover in a long time. the only other good one is the clueless ninja, keep up the good work, and please update soon

plot was good, but the spelling and grammar sucked balls no offence, but it did. work on that a little more

yahoo, another chapter; every day is getting more interesting, but you need to check the grammar .

it is kekkei genkai,what the heck does deam mean