Amusing :)

It's funny how Hermione cheats on own rule ahaha

Lol that's amusing.

Haha! Awesome story!

-Lynn

I think this is a great story but it could use some cleaning up. Some of the wording is confusing and makes the plot unclear. I also suggest slowing down and actually going through some of the events as opposed to mentioning them (ie. the actual truth or dare game).

LOL Now that was funny

LOVE IT!

Haha! This fic was very well written indeed - It definately made me laugh!

Great job!

~Izzy x

So funny.

~Tori

Hahahaha! Cutest little ficcy ever! I love it AND it was funny! Woop woop!

Lines I wish I had written:

“Just thought I’d give the boys a taste before you hitch your wagon,”

“Hitch my wagon hey?”

“M-hmm,” his lips met hers again

“Who is this mystery person I would be hitching my wagon to?”

“I wonder?”

“Yea, it would be far too awkward watching your boyfriend kissing your best chik-friend!”

Haha! I always did like Fred... hm, but this seems a bit risqué, even for Fred, especially for Hermione. Forget OOC, "hitching wagons" not two feet away from your brothers and best friends is certainly... reckless. Try toning it down a bit. Less compromising, please-but don't go prude, that's just not fun.

“Fuck!”

‘Fuck!”

“Fuck” Harry agreed,

“What the Fuck?” Ron was still in the entrance to the tent.

Yet Again A Really Amusing Story - I Love The Hermione/Fread Pairing

aw uber cute! nice work! hehehe

That was cool I like.

JM