| Reviews for The Great Storm |
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charming2drew chapter 3 . 1/26/2010 I love it! All your fics are amazing! I love all this Alan angst! It's the best! |
Phx chapter 3 . 2/7/2009 Very enjoyable story. Totally love your take on the brothers and I do feel for Alan's position. it is hard to be the youngest and it does get tiring to be the butt of everyone's jokes and exasperation. Especially since he is an emotional person who reacts. And it is easy to imagine Gordon not realizing when enough is enough. But I didn't think Alan was being too over the top, especially with a concussion. that won;t have helped his ability to properly sort through his feelings. I am glad it was Gordon who pulled Alan down to sit with him on the mattress. I'd like to think that even with all his teasing, Gordon is also protective. And yeah, you guessed, I'm a sucker for smothered Alan :) He is such a sweetie too, it is no wonder his brothers do love him. Very nice characterization of Jeff as well. Totally enjoyable read! |
Little Miss Bump chapter 3 . 7/29/2008 Wow! I've just realised something. Despite the fact that I've read this fic loads of times and I love it,I noticed that I haven't actually reviewed it yet! I am so sorry! Anyway, it's excellent in every sense of the word. Well written, interesting plot, good character portrayal, great relationships between the family as a whole. I'm impressed! I just can't beleieve that I haven't reviewed befire now, I was so sure that I had! Please write more of these, you're really good at it! |
Pickled Onions chapter 3 . 7/29/2008 Just a passer-by who'd like to congratulate you on a great story! I liked the stuff you said about Jeff and Alan's relationship, and the cute but between Gordy and Al was really sweet. I liked. |
tanpopo no hana chapter 3 . 1/4/2008 Oh the teenage angst! Yep, weren't we all a little bit like that? Great story! |
JennMel chapter 3 . 8/22/2007 Freaking awesome! Loved the little ending you put in there. |
karmine chapter 3 . 8/5/2007 Excellent story! Loved reading it! You should make more, especially about Alan... lol _ |
shadowfox8 chapter 3 . 8/2/2007 This was really cute and I'm glad things worked out with Alan. This was a great story. Keep'm comin! |
Cutiepie2191 chapter 3 . 8/1/2007 Aw... That was an amazing story! I loved every step of it! Keep up the good work:):) |
SherryBird chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 Good ending. Keep writing, I'm looking forward to your next works. |
straywriting chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 "(weren’t we all?)" -cough- still am -cough- So there wasn't as much action as I would have liked but damn man it was still great. I've said it before (I think) and I'll say it again: You're one hell of a writer. All your fics grab my attention and keep it. I find that your fics aren't ones that just pass from memory as soon as I finish a chapter like so many others I read but this one sticks with me and won't stop badgering me with the want to know what's coming next. That's a good thing for you, a not always so nice thing for me. This chapter and fic was a home run in my opinion. I think you captured how every youngest sibling feels when it comes to their older siblings. I should know, I'm the youngest of four and it ain't always pretty. And then there's the family being oblivious to how the youngest if feeling; Alan, I feel your pain. You certainly had those feelings down pat. Please don't take quite as long of a break with the next Thunderbird fic you plan on making because I am addicted to your fics and could read them time and again without getting tired of them but a new one is always nice to see. |
criminally charmed chapter 3 . 7/31/2007 this was a good story, as always, just felt like you could have done more... I like more... more soon? |
Cutiepie2191 chapter 2 . 7/27/2007 Another great chapter! Keep up the good work and update soon:) |
Laurelleaves chapter 2 . 7/27/2007 ohmygosh! lol poor Alan, sorry I didn't review sooner wouldn't let me, I can't wait for the next Chapter! |
thunderincrimson chapter 2 . 7/26/2007 Ow poor Alan! With all that icy rain, he will come down with a bad fever...(at least I hope...yeah I know...but...what can I say...I love big brothers fussing over baby brother _!) |