| Reviews for I don't know |
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  p5L1M chapter 1 . 9/4/2018 Veri n1c3MY9st0ri4g |
| LD1fJ chapter 1 . 9/1/2018 Veri n1c3oJ3st0ri9F |
 anais.dakota chapter 3 . 9/15/2016 I hope you know that this made me depressed :( |
| Altena Q chapter 4 . 9/7/2012 This still needs some grammar and vocabulary corrections, but as for the plot, I like your idea. It is touching, emotional, very sad. Just this "Ann" confused me, it would need an explanation why suddenly it is Kirika's name. And I sincerely hope that you have an option to delete the two previous comments, there are many stupid assholes like them on ffnet, so don't worry and keep writing, your English will sure improve! Good Luck! |
| r chapter 4 . 8/21/2012 your spelling so fucking bad kill yourself |
| d chapter 4 . 8/21/2012 go eate a dick plese |
| STPtje chapter 3 . 9/16/2008 A pretty nice story... but poor Kirika! and I'm sorry but gawd you need to work on your grammar! Good luck writing! |
| Cekil1 chapter 3 . 4/13/2008 You've done such a good job on this story I'm having trouble believing it's your first LOL. I was pretty bumed by the ending but romance doesn't always work out. Thanks for sharing. |
| Shizuma chapter 3 . 3/2/2008 I think the story was going well until Mireille acted so harsh towards sweet Kirika who had just confessed... things could had started changing for the better from here. Also, there are MANY errors or grammar, you could find a beta reader before posting. |
| Ruka-chan1980 chapter 3 . 8/29/2007 Whoa! Harsh ending here! The story is good, but the ending isnt my taste. I like the happy endings where the two are together. Well, there are other tastes... |
| Ruka-chan1980 chapter 1 . 8/29/2007 Hey there! Interisting start! Im curious how the plot will evolve! |
| Cozmos chapter 3 . 8/13/2007 nice chapter..! i hope you'll continue.. a little longer chapter will be great! |
| Anonymous chapter 3 . 8/12/2007 OMG! How could you do that to my poor Kirika? She would never kill herself! It's so pointless... |
| Smoky chapter 2 . 8/11/2007 Howza! Finally got around to reading the new chapter. Sorry I never got around to replying to your PM; anyway grammar-wise you're doing well as you say English isn't your first language :) I can still understand what you're writing. I think it is awesomely interesting how you've really written from inside the characters' minds, right at the moment as they're thinking, particularly with all the confusion that they're experiencing. All the mixed feelings and miscommunication! It brings it to life some. That was kind of cute with Kirika and the nurse. Wonder what happened to her though! Kind of made me go 'uh-oh' ... you're starting with the cliffhangers now _ Well, sorry for rambling so much. Best of luck with writing and keep at it! :) ~S. |
| Cozmos chapter 2 . 8/5/2007 a new chapter..! nice! interesting! update soon, i wanna know what'll happen.. the story have become easier to read, too.. |
