Oh my goodness, this was a fantastic story! For it being your first FredxHermione story you did great! The characters were right on point and I could feel Fred's longing for Hermione. While I definelty prefer longer stories, this one-shot was truly beautiful.

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I think I read this on live journal and loved it so much but couldn't comment since I don't have a profile. I'm so glad to have found it on here! It is one of my favorite fremione one shots. Thank you for writing this!

Listen. This is my favorite Fremione one shot. I just... My chest tightens and I feel like squealing because it is ADORABLE and PERFECT. The characters feel so real and feel like the characters. Really. You are SO talented and a huge reason I started writing my own. I hope with some practice I can write as well as you. You are AMAZING!

i loved it so much. it genuinely made me cry

Amazing!

Loved this little story! Sappy without being too sappy, and perfectly Fred :)

Adorable Fred and Hermione oneshot! Thank you for sharing your story.

Very well written. The transitions are nicely placed, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading Fred's recollection of all the times Hermione almost kissed note. Super adorable. I also like the ending, you don't really know if they will work out and get married, but that just gives you the opportunity to imagine what happened after the author's note.

As like all your other fics, you write any ship so well. I love fremione and this was the perfect level of angst and fluff and overall sweetness and was amazing. I enjoyed reading through Fred’s pov and I liked you also gave us some of his insecurities, making his character so much more than just someone funny and handsome. This was really well written, thank you!

this is my 3rd read through and i'm still bawling my eyes out

You do realize that this deserves tons of more reviews than what you have current?
That was downright wonderful!
I enjoyed reading this.

It's nice to see how it really took them time before they finally gave in and admitted everything. Fred had a lot of patience to have gone on that long. And I love how even though Hermione herself had doubts, she never forgets to appreciate and take to heart whatever moments she and Fred could have and cherishes them. And the whole family backing them up like that? Truly wonderful, my dear.

Thanks! This was great.

This was so beautifully written

Amazing story! I loved it xx