| Reviews for To Be With You |
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   MasKaiHilFantic chapter 1 . 10/27/2016 Perfect, just perfect The emotion is the story can be felt to an amazing extent, your writing is really detailed, yet so simple. You are really an amazing writer, and I am certainly looking forward to read more of your works. Take care _ |
| Athena Midnight chapter 1 . 6/18/2010 That was beautiful! Love the words, and how you have detailed it to the last phrase. KEEP IT UP! StarlightAngel101 |
| BurningAngel555 chapter 1 . 2/7/2009 Ooh! Just found this! Beautiful...wow, this is grand _ Faves! ~BurningAngel55~ |
| jacobs girl 2 chapter 1 . 2/1/2009 i love this chapter so much. i think you should keep making them. |
| Anime Onnanoko chapter 1 . 10/23/2007 aww that as sweet |
| carpeeffingdiem chapter 1 . 7/23/2007 The story's good. I like the fact that Tyson didn't 'accidentally' cheat on her. He feels genuinely in love with another girl, fine for me. The story had a sad and sort of depressed mood except for the last paragraph... I don't know if it's just me, but the last scene, the one with Hilary propelling herself against Kai, seemed kind of comical. Maybe it's the images that came with the scene... Anyways, just a question, do you like the word lackadaisical? Cuz I've read it in 2 of your fanfics, lol. Just my unnatural habit of over-observing things :P. That's all I gotta say. I'm off to review your your other fanfics! Lol Ciao ciao |
| K'onix chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 So...I know I'm late and all, but I just needed to say that that was great. I do wish you didn't have this little habit of leaving a one-shot right in the best part but still make it feel totally finished. Ah, that's such a great talent! You're amazing. |
| musicalgenius chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 yay! another story! and it's as good as all the others! musicalgenius |
| caffeinatedMix chapter 1 . 7/20/2007 hey!hey!i had already read this but was too lazy to reply i guess... another splendid job ofcourse- the song you added perfectly fit the situation... lolz. i luv it |
| hilariberri chapter 1 . 7/19/2007 I'm glad you didn't say it sucked. |
| sky d chapter 1 . 7/16/2007 REALLY GOOD GREAT JOB |
| hil2378 chapter 1 . 7/16/2007 wow!luv the fic n the song! n y does a lot of ppl use my name?as if i'm the bad guy here? T.T -crying 4 a stupid reason- ayway awesome job on the fic! . |
| dranzerhilary chapter 1 . 7/16/2007 awesome! jess! i bet your not a littli bit lazy! i bet you put your whole brain in making this. |
| Kaichoo chapter 1 . 7/16/2007 OHOHOHOHOOHOHOHO.. i finally take a step back into _ anyways, as usual, such great detail in usage of words.. (really, i got nothing to say rite now) and yes! kai is definitely in character. ya~ha! great great great job! now, to see what i have miss here for the last month. hahaha~ ~when Logic meets Art~ -Kai Isolated- |
| Molly Yokunaii chapter 1 . 7/15/2007 you finally posted something :D:D:D and it was awesome! it has been so long since we have heard from you :( and BOUM you come back with a wonderful Kai/Hil one shot! I hope you won't make us wait another month because it feels like eternity! I can't wait to read another story of yours! |
