Reviews for Un Papillon
giiovz chapter 8 . 8/2/2019
so is Schwartz after the sailor scout's immortality?
Kathy chapter 18 . 6/1/2019
It's been a long time since I have actually been on this site, but it's good to find some hidden gems in the mess this site is now. Normally I would consider myself a Usagi/Serena fan, but I also used to be a pretty big Weiss fangirl long ago so I gave it a shot. Very pleasantly surprised!

I really like your version of Weiss here, especially Youji and Ken. You really nailed the dynamic of them both. Can't help but wonder if Youji running off with another woman will upset Minako or if they're really that tight since they're both so flighty? Also, what happened to the Outers? Where is poor Hotaru? Will this be the next arc in the story? Maybe more Usagi involved?

And Schwartz, yummy. At first I was convinced that Rei would end up with Crawford or Schuldig, but I will admit that I like this twist with Aya you have thrown in. I can't really see Crawford with anyone so I'm glad you've kept the crush as one-sided as you have, but it sure is fun! Especially Rei gushing about him in this chapter. That being said, I really would like to see more Aya character development beyond his icy self now that he's had his redemption.

Update soon!
Yojigirl2020 chapter 18 . 12/3/2018
This is being revised? Boo.

I love Weiss and just started getting into the Sailor Moon xover section. This story by far is the best even without the revisions. You’re very gifted!

Gosh I just want to know what you had in store for this story! I feel like it’s so close to being done! I need to know! More please!
Taylor chapter 18 . 1/15/2018
Best story on FF. Well put together, suspenseful, and always leaving me wanting more. Even though you are looking to rewrite this I hope you will continue on with the actual storyline soon since you seemed like you were close to finishing it.
AscellaStar chapter 18 . 10/19/2017
awe what a cliffy! hope you work on finishing this! please please please
Yuki-chi chapter 18 . 3/19/2017
Firstly, as a life long WK and SM fan, I can honestly say that I have found some great cross-over material on and this is one of those stories. Rei is just such an easy tie into their world with her political background, but I'm also glad you roped in the other senshi too. One thing most of these crossovers miss is just how involved the senshi are in each others live-secrets like these seem like they would be hard to keep. I also love that while trying to do the right thing, the senshi are pulled into this dark, unpure world that brings them that inner turmoil and makes them question their morality.

Secondly, while I do love this story to bits, I am gad you are rewriting it. The plot got kind of muddled, but I'm still hoping it will include some of the original content (like Marine Cathedrial, Takatori's dramatic death, Ran-kun's pancakes...). Though I am interested in how the two will differ here on out. I just hope with this rewrite something different can be done about Rei's abilities since she seems like she's getting a bit too powerful. Being able to freely manipulate fire seems like quite enough? Maybe not? Either or, you should revisit this story.
Children of Venus chapter 18 . 2/19/2017
I thought there was going to be more chapters for some reason! Gone by to fast.

Two quick things about this chapter!

First, so glad Minako is back and the story behind Shwartz is coming together and they are going to get to bottom of it all! That has been making me crazy trying to figure it out!

Second, Aya living/staying at the template is totally something I could see him doing. He seems so conflicted with but yet so trusting (?) in Rei. what better way than staying with the root of all these emotions?! hahaha plus the shrine seems like a good place for him to clear his head!

Also I liked this chapter a lot so don't dislike it. Sometimes you just gotta feel the feels!
Children of Venus chapter 17 . 2/19/2017
Yes! Totally feeling the whole Aya/Rei vibe here! Totally into the irony and the intensity behind their relationship! Love it! She may be my number two but still gotta love er!

Still sad Minako has gotten moved to the back burner but it makes sense! Poor Mina-chan! I just hope there is more Youji/Minako action in the future!

It seems like you kind of left this story behind, but I found a website to watch Weiss and I'm totally digging it! You should revisit this one more!
Children of Venus chapter 13 . 2/18/2017
Wow! This chapter was PERFECT! Rei's speech and her feelings and wow! Amazing! I was totally routing for Crawford/Rei in the beginning, but the whole my-enemy's-daughter thing really makes me like the idea of Rei/Aya! Their scene in these past few chapters really did it in for me. Squee! BUT WHAT ABOUT MINAKO?!
Children of Venus chapter 9 . 2/18/2017
Hm! Im not real familar with Weiss but I guess I should go watch it! This has been incredible!
ayakun33 chapter 18 . 9/13/2015
you should def update this! really want to see mina get some revenge!
Anon chapter 4 . 12/4/2013
As much as I always enjoy your work, I kind of miss the old stitchwork chapter. I liked how Rei had sort of just tuned out the world. It felt very sullen and surreal whenever I read it. It had more feeling to me I guess. Oh well. Continue!
varee chapter 18 . 9/11/2013
Well, that was fun. The narration, plot, incredibly unchanged characters... I mean, do you know how hard it is to find a decent SM/something fanfic? Especially one that does not feature Usagi as the main character?
I love your story. Though, looking at its span and the number of chapters I understand it's a loooong time between chapters.. Still, it'll be worth the wait.
You got yourself another faithful reader.
Cheers,
Varee
jkl chapter 18 . 8/10/2013
update dont keep us in suspense
agoraphobia chapter 18 . 3/12/2013
As much as I love blink, which is a damn lot, my heart belongs to this fic. Hopefully you'll update soon! I'd love to see this all tied together!
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