E-End? END? gosh! no! How can you do this?
SEQUEL!

I'll say it again - very happy there is a sequel. :)

ETA - I have realised there was another reason why your story caught my attention so - the fanfic I failed to finish has Snape's mind and soul transferred to another's body, and he is having an internal struggle with the wants and desires of his new body. Duality is fun to write, isn't it? :)
I need to finish that fic...argh...

It's this kind of story that leaves you empty and aching after reading it, after realizing that it's the end...

What can I say? This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read and believe me I've read plenty so I know what I'm talking about. Thank you so much for writing it, though you probably won't even see this comment. But just in case you do, please, write more Snarry stories in the future, because fandom needs them

This is a FUCKING GOOD STORY

Why is Hermione eating brie? It's famously risky for pregnant women due to bacteria such as listeria.

I really loved Tread softly and Ashes of time. I'm so glad I gave the first one a chance when I stumbled upon it a few days ago... I almost skipped it upon seeing the SSHP because that is my NOTP (age difference). Nonetheless, it was beautiful and moving and I hope you continue to use your gift for writing throughout your life.

AAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH

Cried, i hate crying. Thank you for putting so much time into this.

So Harry (Jonathan) is still alive. I guess with the ice looking like the hexagonal rose then he was in a way cryogenically frozen waiting to be thawed. I'm glad that it was Severus who did the unthawing though. I have a feeling that once Harry is completely awake he will not be happy with how Hermione and Severus have been treated. Look forward to reading the read of this story.

I thought in the other story to this it said that Neville died in the war. When Harry (Jonathan) left Hogwarts he went to the North and froze to death, didn't he? That's where all that magic is coming from I bet. Look forward to reading the rest of this story.

That kind of ending is quite frustrating. But I also liked it in a way. In any case, that was a great fanfiction. I really had a great time reading it. Thank you for your work !

What? No, don't just end it there! Awww I wanted to read them finally getting together and admitting their love... darn. Anyway, that was enough of a happy ending for me. Wonderful job! Oh, just so you know, you started replacing the living twin Fred with George a chapter or two ago.

Damn I was hoping that Voldemort's half of Harry's soul had been kissed and Harry's half had remained. But hat wouldn't be the Jonathan that Severus loves, would it?

What? No!