Ah un momento veramente toccante!

but yondaime's name was minato namikaze

3 chapters in and your fic is 30 chapters... is it all going to be this bullshit?

Great job shame you stopped working on it

Yo! Sorry to hear about you rewriting the story. It really is great, but I also understand the introspective part of looking back onto your work. I really really enjoyed it, and I think a lot of others enjoyed too. If you are going to, I am most definitely looking forward to the rewrite.

This story being discontinued still makes me sad :'(

I was waiting for her to suck his dick but it never came and I'm disappointed

I thought that Hokage meant fire shadow

Hello i was wondering if you were still going to work on the story or are you scrapping the whole thing or are ypu just not update at all anymore i reallt di love the story and there arent many stories for hayate being naruto's sensei please let us now what is going to happen and if you are going to remake rhe story again or not

i jjust found this fic yesterday and i quite like it ~ sad to hear your scrapping it but I hope the next version is just as good if not better! keep up the good work .

Please hurry and update this story soon it’s very interesting

I liked the concept behind your story. The language and the grammar were good and the interaction between the characters was fine.
Naming Shibi's wife as Tanya was strange because it is not a Japanese name and that put me off.
For some reason, I felt Shino be more emotional at certain points in the fic...
But I liked the fic well enough to continue with it.
What I didn't like was this chapter. Firstly, I believe that the dog summoning contract is something that belongs to Hatake family and not the Inuzuka. Secondly, even in canon, Sasuke left the village only after he saw that he wouldn't be getting adequate training in the village (that and he got jealous over Naruto's strength).

Okay. Kakashi is waaaaaaaaay beyond Anko's level, and Kakashi would NEVER willingly go up against Orochimaru. Yet somehow, your Anko has managed to kill Orochimaru, one of the three Sannin. I think this is where I stop reading this story.

What the hell is with Kotetsu and Izumo calling Naruto things like 'sweetheart' and 'adorable'? Are they some type of pathetic puffs in this story? I don't need the mental scarring.

This story was going so well for the first 19 chapters, then out of NOWHERE, the Inuzuka decide to allow five of their pups bond with non-clan members that were barely even friends with her son. The Aburame at least had some previous contact, but it is still highly improbable. Both the dogs and the bugs require YEARS of dedicated practice and experience to even be remotely effective partners.