I couldn't love this story more. You wrote this so well u love everything about it

Wow that was a cool story but the only thing that your missing is the ending! I must know what happens next! I'll be waiting!

This is a amazing book, the author has a beautiful act and talent for writing and was able to inspire me at best. This writing may be short and unfinished, but still good, the book expressed excellent description, and a lot of personality, I did find this rather enjoyable, and I was intrigued all the way threw and questioning many things, keeping me reading every word, and practically pulling me threw the book.

Waah this was a really nice an cute story ; 7 ; gosh the angst and feels-I can't-jdhvhj amazing job as usual love this story! ; 7 ; ))b

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I think I like this.

I loved this but I wish there was more to it! Like how they start to get along more! or even a marrige preposal! XD that be to much i guess XD

What a cute story. I loved it. :)

That was really sweet, I loved how you portrayed Axel and Roxas.

You slay me with cuteness. BAWW. 8'D

Andy and Darby squeak with indignation at being supplanted as the cutest thing in the room. XD

this is a cute story!

i was like "aw!..."

gd job!

Aha, it's so cute. Makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside~

IT'S TOO EARLY TO BE HERE!

Oh my goodness, why did I need a fix at three in the morning.

This was a really good fic. I got a little annoyed with Roxas when he started calling Sora an idiot, but then I read it a few more times and it somewhat sunk in.

Why, hello, Mister-Stalker-Pyromaniac-Axel! That was about the best part, the way he kept showing up when Roxas didn't want him until Roxas did want him and even then he wouldn't let the blonde live it down.

I'm going to attempt to sleep. Ish. I'll plug your inbox at a later time. Love and encouragment!

Aw! Axel was kind of stalker-ish,

but it was in a completely adorable way! _

uhm..axel the stalker..yeah, i like that idea..XD

it's funny how he always felt 'bored' n used it as a reason to bug roxas..and i was like,'aw, axie..just admit it..u like him.. say it!'

n he did.. :)

the ending is sweet..XD it only..um..kinda short..

ehem..i'm a bit naive..i'd always wanted an ending like, they live happily ever after..:D but then again, that's wayy too childlish..

OOH! this is wonderful! great work!