I'm a little confused does Endrance have a crush or is he in love with Haseo?

-bows to you- awesome! totally awesome!

*dies of nosebleed* That was amazing. You're awesome. -Madeline

That was HAWT! -Lydia

OMG! *fangirl squeel* I love you. 3 -Lana

We loved it! -Madeline, Lydia, and Lana.

I never knew the hikikomori had it in him!

Must stop smiling now.

. Excuse me -hides under teh desk for a while-

XDD

Jkjkjk.

haha/

I like it though ]

very good smut.

I always think for endrance though there hads to be more sentiment, just because of how emotionally unstable he is you know?

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Just me .

anyweays, keep uip the fanfastic work!

"Oh, and also, requesting permission to worship and/or stalk."

-PlainAndSimple-

LOOL ! xD

There have been some pretty crazy reviews! :o endrance can MARRY HASEO! zomg x3 (gotta see that)

Yes apart from "the adept rouge", whoo! This story is very, hmm poignant! :/) (just wanted to use a 10$ word there ) ;p

*DROOLING BIG TIME* ME LOVE EN AND HASEO MY FAV YAOI PARING

Lol.. you inner pervert got out? I loved En-Kun, he kinda reminds me of Zelda's Vaati for some reason...huh, must be my imagination!

Ah well it says that a well-rounded critique is the best tool for the writer, but I can find little to critique. I *love* the HaseoXEndrance pairing. Then again, I've been a shounen-ai/Yaoi fan since I accidentally discovered Gravitation (that was funny, I had no idea what shounen-ai or Yaoi were, and then there was that kiss... and I was hooked. My husband disdains it, of course, but yaoi anime/manga/fanfic etc. - all good, from suggested all the way to more hardcore, such as this story.

I loved it.

I absolutely loved it. Ever since it dawned on me while playing the .hack/G.U. games, that Endrance's words weren't really a mistranslation (and I wondered how the censors allowed this one through without an M rating, or worse yet, altered it.. I'm so glad they didn't) When I found out that Haseo could MARRY Endrance in the game, assuming several conditions were met, I realized that this was all very intentional and starting looking for HxE fanfic ;) This is the first story I've found that was explicit but also fun, and pretty well written, a typo or two, that's it. Nicely paced, and unembarrassed erotica. I've noticed that many try to write erotica but don't get it quite right due to embarrassment, or over-writing.

You nailed it. (They did also, lol) Very, very good, more please, lots more just like this. I don't get the Haseo x Silabus thing, if it were to happen, Haseo would have to be the dom, since Silabus is so innocuous. I can't see him doing what Endrance would, if someone has a story that counters what I just said, I'd love to read it. :)

In the game, I was stunned to read Endrance telling Haseo time and again that his entire being was there to serve him (whew) I realized immediately that someone had to be writing fanfic, but truly this happens to be the first story I've found that really does it well.

Nicely done, kudos and give us lots more please.

Hm... I don't normally review smut, but... for you I'll make an exception.

Twi-chan is an amazing writer, and I wish to know how she writes so well! I'm jealous. ._. In any case, I demand moar (yes, I said it, moar!) En/Haseo... because it is hott and amazing.

Oh, and also, requesting permission to worship and/or stalk.

Excuse my language but... Hot damn! That was quite intoxicating and erotic (is that the right word) to read. I enjoyed every word of it till the end. Still very hot and well done. Continue you your great work. Hm... Endrance stalking turned out to be something good in the end. :3

*scream* AH! You NEED to write SMUT with Haseo/Silabus! LOL! That'd be a sight for sore eyes! *pointing at eyes* Miine are sore from dialation the other day, but please please, gimme something niice to read, yeaz? ;D?

LoL! Anyway, I love your writing style! And I've noticed the constant smut in your Haseo/Endrance fics... LoL, it's all good, though. ;D! Still love it. X3!

O.0 *nosebleed* wow that was hot. If only my yaoi stories turned out that good xD

Damn... :O I envy you..I have such a hard time writing smut. .; If I ever did write something smutty though, I'd want it to have some 'meaning,' y'know?

But then again, it is SMUT..so maybe it doesn't always have to have a purpose. :D

*steals cookie and runs away*

I'm just kidding. _ Um. Omgyayhurray? I like SilabusxHaseo.. well, a fucking lot. But every once in a while I like to mix things up a bit. So woo.