Really strong writing and a heartbreaking story.

K, a few points here:

You're a very good writer. This flowed well and was a good read. You should definitely write more wrestling fics.

And the fact that you used RVD and went the unpredictable route made this 10x better.

Very good job, I'd love to read more of your stuff.

Wow...I did not see RVD coming lol. This was really good. You're a very talented writer :D

sweet, i love stories like this and rob van dam added a good twist. i wasnt expecting it. i love it.

I absolutely loved this story it was great. And don't get me wrong i really did love it but... RVD? I love him. I'd love to see you write again this is great. Maybe one with John Cena and Maria, but not a bad John a good John!