Oh god! XD That was brilliant!

Awesome!

That is actual genius, I was laughing all the way through. I love the way you've got Jerrie - cleverer than he's usually portrayed, but still believeably in character. Wonderful. More? Please?

Oh man that was a good one. I love it when slash is funny like this- and incidentally, now that I think of it, your Macavity reminds me a bit of Snape with that whole insult-peppered-conversation habit. Still loving the "posh" version of this (ostensible) villain.

Wow, loved it! Probably my favorite Mungojerrie take ever. Love Jerrie trying to narrate and being unable to come up with 'solarium'...cute!

And the spit-take won it for me. XD

Hahaha, I love this story. It's cute really. I think you should do another one like this one soon.

OMG This was spaztastically amazing! Mungojerrie/Macavity never really occurred to me, but you make it work like charm. As for characterization goes, it's right on the spot. I never bought the other interpretations of Macavity brute. Since the song goes: "he's outwardly respectable," you could say that he's got funny mannerisms, such as here. As for Mungojerrie, oh yes!

And I love the part where Macavity stabs his omelet. And coffee rules all.

Wow. I loved it, it made me giggle. Complementary mochas every thursday? I'd work for him. It was very funny, good job. They make an... interesting couple, I have to say.

Hope you plan to write more.

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