Please do continue! It is by far the greatest fan fiction for Greek mythology I have ever read! Achilles, is epic, I did a study over his life time and I fell head over heels in love! Thank you for adding him, I'm sure he will make a splendid character!

I like this story very much. Please continue. I give my full support.

noticed you haven't updated in a while:( i really enjoyed this story and i hope you continue! i want to see more of hera and dane. i am intrigued by the sub plot with vanni to. please update!:)

-peachybooklover

A bit short, thank you for the honor of devoting a chapter to me, I don't think Achilles was mean enough but hey your story, Apollo is something that as in my PM I stated most of my opinion though I would also like to point out that I like his manipulative evil attitude you have going so I can't complain there.

Though hopefully we'll see how Hera and Dane are faring next chapter...

Not bad! The gods are pretty tame, but that's the beauty of creative freedom. Keep up the good work!

*blinks and is confused because she hasn't read this in years*

I will honestly say I have no idea what's happening, but reading your author's note at the end of the last chapter and my subsequent review made me laugh. A lot. Oh the irony. ;)

This is very short! And more direct-to-point than your usual writing style, methinks. Not sure what's going on, but I like Apollo, and I have a feeling Achilles is not going to be my favorite character. Though his gorgeousness made me think he was Hercules for a moment. *is disappointed*

By the way, what prompted this, exactly? Curious. It's not bad, just short and confusing. :P

Maybe you could...fill me in on what all has happened? I don't feel like reading it all again. Too lazy. But I take it you remember your fanfiction password now. Good for you. Now write; write like the wind! And review. That too. :)

-DPSG1

Your fanfic seems to possess a life of it's own, something very rare in fanfics these days. You have earned my praise, something incredibly difficult to do since I generally find fanfics and stories involving Hera and romance a bad idea.

So with those thoughts in mind I would like to beg you; Beg you to continue your noble piece of art and to continue writing it till you are finished so that we the readers do not feel cheated of one of the greatests online stories on the net, good day to you and a merry life.

Its a great story, I luv it!

Wow, this is the best Hera story I have ever read. I love how you portray her, she is not just a jealous scheming wife, she's a woman who is hurt by her husband's stupid deeds. Please update soon!

This is really good! Please write more!

Uh oh. I forget what this is all about now. :( Sad times. I'm liking this "Apollanni" pairing thing going here, and, surprisingly, Dane was quite tolerable in this chapter. Hera is still disgusting. I doubt I shall ever like her. Sorry. She's just an irritating character. Dane's angsty mood made him a lot more acceptable to me, rather than his usual "Oh, I'm so cool and I'm going to intrude on the gods because I'm adventurous and special" attitude. Apollo still gets voted as favorite character. And Vanni reminded me of the all-knowing Dumbledore bit there. Scary. Anyway, not much else to say with such a short chapter. Nice to see you continuing, though. Very appreciated, I feel compelled to say on behalf of all the readers, however few or many there may be. And please do finish this, even if your love life becomes the most wonderful thing in the world. :D An eventual ending would sure provide some nice closure. Wish I could say the same for "The Ghost Portal is a Stargate!" "Failure" and "Uncertainties," but, proportionally, I've actually finished more stories than you. Well...fanfiction stories, anyway. ;P So...great job. Nicely written. I'm liking it better now. And good luck with whatever problems you may be having in your love life!

-DPSG1 (I love pretending I don't know you)

This story rock! Keep it up!

this is fantzstic! I loved the story! I can't wait until you update again!

Adeiu

Waoka

love it ! update soon

Whoo, I forget to press submit.

Let's start with chapter 7 and ignore the 3 I skipped. I don't really get that last sentence, most notably the word 'your.' You just switched the POV from third to second with ONE WORD. And thus, it doesn't match the rest of your chapter's tone, let alone the story. Unless, it was meant to be like that...

Also, you hint that Hera knows about death as much as a 5-year old, maybe less (five-year olds have parents to tell them these things). This is really unreasonable unless the gods just seized power or something-they would have decades, centuries to figure stuff out. Let's move on pretending this is the case. So anyways, Hera, on a bout of insanity, decides to check if he's dead by putting her ear on his sweat-covered chest, right over his heart as if she knew what to do, which of course you told us she is 'inexperienced' and doesn't know what she's doing. Hm... suspicious. Maybe she had... other motives in mind? *evil grin* Kidding, kidding, you probably wouldn't get it anyway.

I do like the dialogue though. Happy face there.