such a pity that you have to stop here though I'm still hoping that you'll update this one if ever haha :D such a great story though KUDOS!

This story has been interesting. I do want to know how it turns out. I hope, that you'll finish it, even after all this time.

what heppen next?

i really like this story and i wish for you to update this story and i hope that complete it because if not i will be disaponited i like how the story is progressing i hope you write more chapters.

DANG IT! It's over! T.T I want to read more. I hope I can soon.

please update i like the story and want to see what happens please update soon i'm begging you can't leave me hanging.i hope you update soon i check this story very often maybe once or twice a week to see if you update so please give your readers more chapers thanks.

when are you going to post another chapter?

i love this story

die may die

i really hope that you update soon please

i like your story very much and i want to know the rest

ooh...

what're they gonna talk about?

update more...

thanks we...

oh...

ouch to sora!

i'll kill that may!

You could try what I do... I write my story in 1 file. then to create each chapter I mark each one within the file itself. after that to post each individual chapter; I create a new blank file, temporarily copy and paste the chapter I want to post.

after all that I delete the temp file, on my comp, after I post it here.

this way I can just scroll to re-read the story if I need to remember something.

hey, this was great! please update soon :D

So, LaylaYuri and SoraLeon have kids in the series? I don't remember seeing that in the anime.

okay... that was weird.

Maya is so mean..

i wish leo would find out that his real mom is sora.

update soon!

~hugsh-pugsh~