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I like it this is awesome I cannot wait to see more

Doing physical training in your mind makes absolutely no sense, it wouldn't affect your reflexes or your actual strength, because its in your mind. It would've made more sense for Kyuubi to be going over theory, or seals (he had been sealed in two seals mistresses, him not knowing Anything about seals is extremely unlikely), or even just regular mental excersizes like puzzles and logic problems.

This story has a great premise and the grammar is mostly perfect, but the one thing that bothers me is the ease in which Kyuubi accepts Naruto, as well as how quickly Naruto is getting stronger (a malnourished five year old can carry 200lb of weight just through a month of training?) It's unrealistic in my opinion, but nonetheless I do enjoy reading this. Other than the previous points I mentioned, the story flows nicely and has a good pacing. I think I'm going to enjoy reading this story!

please contunue

SUCH DEVOTION WAS POSED FROM THE POWER OF YOUTH! *Thumbs up with a wide grin etched on face,The sunset dropping slowly behind me* YOSH!

Please continue

T.T Woe is me finding such a good story that still remains unfinished T.T

OuO

Please I want more of this! Could there be a sequel to the story?!

(1) it was taken from Chobits! I love that anime and I wanted to see more than what was shown.

:D I knew they were gonna get shipped from the moment they met, I could just see it already (SasukexHaku)

FUCK ITS SO FUCKING FUCKY CUTE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK

IM GONNA KILL KIZU! IM GONNA FUCKING KILL HIM!

...7 years...
The amount of years Naruto was on his mission with Lei-Fai...

You are cruel...