why drop this it was good I had hopped for more

loved it

Please update this.

It's been twelve years since your last update... Is there a chance you'll continue this story? I love it! And how come they are now on Gallifrey when he just explained to jack how and why it was impossible..?
So now Evan has the chance to become a Time Lord...
PLEASE update!

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You know Petuina is getting those pills for Vernon

pretty please update.

So your good I like this

To be fair I'm in this cause its interesting, I only usually don't read a story if the crammer is ban enough that every third word has a crammer mistake or spelling mistake

Ooooh, I am SO looking forward to seeing what type wand you will give him! :D

Now, if his personality is anything like the Doctors, it will be nearly as long as Hagrids, which was the longest in recorded history. 16 and a half inch, was it? (Bigger personality Bigger wand.)

Now, he will have a much more rigid, yet flexible wood...perhaps something 'springy'? Because he is no push-over in this fic, but not stiff and stuck up either.

As for wood... tricky, tricky. It depends entierly on his personality and magical leaning... I suspect only you can say for sure. All I know is that it will NOT be holly.

Core is going to be interesting...

On one side, the phoenix feather of fawkes IS linked to his desteny. In adition, phoenix feather is a symbol of death and rebirth...very... time-lord-y. But who knows?

Of course, the eerie way Olivander ALWAYS have a wand for EVERY single person passing by makes me think he MUST have at least SOME skills in predicting the future...or at least what wands someone will need in the future. There are simply too many options for it not to do so.

Which means he could very well have put fawkes feather with a different wood than holly, sensing it would be wrong, even if he wanted to use a contrasting wood. A skilled wandmaker would certantly know.

At any rate, this is exciting! *Grins* Keep up the good writing work!

I really like what you did with Petunia.
Most people tend to view her as either pure evil, or secretly a nice woman, when all she is is human.

That is to say, a pretty despicable and shallow humans with a deeprooted jealousy turned to hate of her sister, and filled with bitterness. She proboably wouldn't think of herself as cruel tho. So she NEEDS a justification for abandoning Harry, to make herself feel better, and feel like she's not a bad person.

You're the only one who gets that.

Maybe you'll manage to write dumbledore as the misguided, guilt-and-search-for-redemtion, 'sacrifice the one for the many' kind of asshole he is.

No sacrificial victim likes being sacrificed. And had Harry known his fate sooner, he'd never done it. And would have hated dumbledore. Might even have joined Voldie out of spite, a bit depending... So dumbledore is a clever bastard. But he honestly believes what he does is good and morally right. And he's not wrong. A leader HAS to sacrifice some people for the 'greater good'.

Anyway... I'm intrigued by this story. Looking forward to read the rest.

I'm so upset this is where it ends. I'd love it if you returned someday.

HOLY CARP 2008 i still favorited and subscribed in the hopes that through time and space you will finish this story oh and really love the story

Boy is that woman a bit dense. Yes, humans basically have one heart but that doesn't take into other species. But even then I have heard of rare cases of humans being born with two hearts that has helped doctors perform surgery to repair the damaged one keeping the patient alive. I remember my grandmother an RN telling of one case during her time before retiring. She has since past away at 103 years old. The individual needed surgery on both but they did one at a time. Doing the most damaged first allowed for recovery then did the Second one. The individual made a full recovery but never heard much more after that over the years. Weird situation but it worked in that person's favor.

Hope to read more soon.

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That moment when you realise this story hasn't had an update in nearly 10 years and you've just gotten invested in it -_- *flips a table over*