I love this I wish you made it longer though.

This is an enticing read of how it starts out with Retsu getting Ran right where he wants her. Retsu is different from his usual calm, collected self. I never imagine Retsu to be so straightforward in expressing his emotions to others. It looks like Ran is the one to bring out his wild side.

Ooh nice and sexy and tasteful at once.

After he flung himself on top of her when Rio was kicking them around, it made me think that there was something there between them! I would love to see the two of them together. I adore Jan, but he seems a little...um...immature for Ran.

YES! FINALLY! A good Retsu/Ran oneshot! You are currently my savior! I just wish this kind of attraction between them would show up in the show. *sigh* thanks again!

I love Ran and Retsue together (though unforunately, I can't ever see it happening in the series), although with this particular one-shot of here, I could see it the other way around, Ran pinning Retsu down and making the move. I think Retsu is too shy to ever go after a girl on his own!