Reviews for Splintered
Guest chapter 8 . 6/15/2019
I really hope you haven't given up on thos story yet, it's so interesting and I can't wait to see what happens!
Jo-nne-4 chapter 8 . 1/20/2019
While it seems like this story has been long abandoned, I still hope it will continue! I really love the way you describe the twins feelings, it really lets the reader step in their shoes.
I'm hoping this will one day continue, but even if it isn't, thank you for writing this :)
HappyCoolios chapter 8 . 12/12/2017
Hi there! Got to say, this is definitely one of my favourite stories, Elladan and Elrohir are fantastic! I love all the personalities of your characters in this! I hope that little Elrohir can bring the bond to his twin closer again! :) *fingers crossed!*
I super hope you update this soon & that it's not abandoned! It's such an awesome story!
Thanks! ~HC~
AndurilofTolkien chapter 8 . 4/4/2017
great job
AndurilofTolkien chapter 5 . 4/4/2017
love this
AndurilofTolkien chapter 1 . 4/4/2017
love
Guest chapter 8 . 6/16/2016
I have reread this story dozens of times, it is so good. Your writing is amazing. Every character has such a distinct personality and it is so interesting to read about the inner working of their minds. While I definitely have my favorite characters in this story I can sympathize with each character to some degree as you explore their reasoning and feelings. I cannot wait to read more of this and I hope that you can update it soon!
Epsilon Scorpii chapter 8 . 4/25/2016
Oh wow. This is the best family fic I've ever read in any fandom, and I've read a lot.
I especially enjoyed your 'foreshadowing demise', but I find this even better. So many little misunderstandings accumulating, yet each one of them is so utterly relatable, each point of view of every one of the characters is easily understood and sympathized. The fleshing out of characters is astoundingly well-done in this fic, and I adore reading every single interaction they have because of it. I am actually able to draw many parallels of my own family life with a pair of fictional elves in a fantasy kingdom. That alone is an incredible feat from you.
Oh, and Elladan's responses never fails to make me laugh- particularly the one about the 'Alertness lessons'. Hahaha
It's been a very long time since you've written, but I do hope I may be able to encourage you to pick up this story again.
Nargothrond chapter 8 . 2/10/2016
Pleeeeeeeeeease continue. It would be a terrifying shame not to :)
Uruviel Phoenix chapter 8 . 10/21/2015
Oh my goodness how my heart aches for those boys!
What happens next? Surely it must come to a head soon?
U.P.
FriendLey chapter 8 . 6/30/2015
Pls continue this story! I really like the conflicts present as well as the contrast of parenting styles. The story is really well written.
Marisda4 chapter 8 . 7/30/2013
Love this story update soon please!
Forward chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
I adore your story, you write so well I can feel their emotions! Please don't give up on this story!
Zarelle chapter 8 . 4/30/2013
Really adoring this fic. I love your twins and the understanding that is slowly happening to each of them separately and overall. I really feel for both little Elflings in this. I also feel for his parents, you've managed to make their short-term neglect understandable, but also with Elladan a long-term issue. A very well formed and written idea.

A special mention for the Thranduil/Legolas interaction. I do love any fic where their relationship is easy and yet thoughtfully demonstrated.
TheVastraNararda chapter 8 . 4/23/2013
Wow! This is a really great story! I hope you'll keep it up and not leave us all hanging _
I look forward to more!
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