Reviews for Two and One |
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ColoursWillNotFade chapter 5 . 4/20/2017 Awesome story, even though it's been a few years since the last update, hopefully you will update it _ |
ONDER chapter 5 . 12/15/2016 Where are you?! This book is so good, why you no update?! *cries* |
Yami no Tsuki chapter 5 . 11/1/2014 Also, ooh yay! My vote would have been for romance _ This is coooool, maybe not AMAZINGASDFGHJKL level, but definitely worth reading. I appreciate the lack of mistakes, too. So rare. Except for a ton of typos near the end of this chapter . So good job! :D |
Yami no Tsuki chapter 4 . 11/1/2014 Kami means deity, god, etc, as in a noun. The Japanese for 'God' is Kami-sama. (You could just say god, though. The word translates directly to English.) |
Yami no Tsuki chapter 3 . 10/31/2014 Cauldron would be 'ko—rudoron' but as far as I can tell the rest is right _ |
lifelovelaugh chapter 5 . 5/1/2014 You choice easy names to remember so I kept track fairly easy hope to find more chapters soon it was pretty awesome :D |
A great story chapter 5 . 3/8/2014 Hello? Mr. Author, it has been YEARS since you have last updated the story. Please update soon! |
maikov chapter 5 . 7/6/2013 Really amazing, not cliched like most. The summary was good and i like how you added they would have help keeping track of the evils. The fact you distrubited the jobs and added the other main characters from the Narutoverse, i applaud you on that. Amazing so far, cant wait for the update! |
Yuki-kyo-kira chapter 5 . 6/16/2013 This is really good so far! But I see that you have not updated it in over 5 years! Hope you post more soon! |
Theia Pallas chapter 5 . 11/20/2012 Please update! They haven't even got to Hogwarts yet! Please! XDD abik. |
Aza Marael chapter 5 . 9/23/2012 Please update soon! |
nytlyt chapter 1 . 1/15/2012 I like your story, but I find it hard to believe that the ANBU taicho would pass Sasuke over Naruto. This being said I'm saying this because ANBU is not some company where the top can decide its successor. You said yourself that if the taicho dies then the SIC takes the position that would be Sasuke, but since all ANBU answer to the hokage really it would have been Tsunade's decision to pass over Sasuke. Otherwise your story is fine. |
Sweetfoxgirl13 chapter 5 . 11/3/2011 SQUEEEEEEEEE! neh neh, maybe some brotherly love kibanaru to make Sasuke jealous? But...Are you still doing this? TT_TT If not I'll sik my virtual demon on you! |
Janica Bunny chapter 5 . 10/12/2011 Ahh... well all that I can say for certain is that this is definitely interesting! Also that the characters are OC. Not too much but it's definitely a very noticeable OCness. I do hope though that you will update soon. I would like to read more and see what you do with this ficcie. :) One LAST thing to note. Get a beta reader. you have several several several spelling and grammar mistakes that could easily be avoided if it were simply proofread. :) |
KuroChaos01 chapter 5 . 6/6/2011 Wow this story is really really really really really good. For some reason ive been obsessed with harry Potter Naruto Xover fics. but there are not many that are finished and most havent been updated in FOREVER. I know it has been a while but PLEASE update, it will be a shame to let a good story go to waste. x |