Oh man, oh man. I know this story hasn't been updated in a while, but if there is any chance of you continuing to work on it I REALLY hope you do! Out of all the Edvy fics I've read this one is by far my absolute favorite. The story and characters are just so wonderfully written, and the dynamic of the relationships in this are excellent!

Regardless, I shall be happily reading what you have here over and over. It's just fabulous! 3

Nooooooooooo! Cliffhanger!

Nuuuuu will u ever continue? I love it so much

Hello, I loved your fic, hopefully soon upload more chapters, Al spent with Ed but Ed also passed, and Ed and Winry do not go together or joke that is wrong with Alfons Ed, I understand that this Ed so hurt at al, but Alfons is not to blame, I prefer Ed uke, I love the couple RoyxEd, although the couple AlfonsxEd I love, especially because I love Ed, but sometimes it's silly, and Roy is still more silly and perverted before, hopefully do more fics of them is well, thank you and kisses.

I want you to update. Do it soon.

You made a Mello reference...

….You are a genius-

Oh, you explained it. _;

men, update soon! c'mon...

al's so cuteeeeeeee

envy: jealous, kimbley?
kimbley; you wish, slut.
LOL HAHAHAHAAHH

This is pretty good. Though I wish there was more Edvy moments, but oh well, and please update soon.

Two things.

One: OH MY GOODNESS THIS STORY IS AMAZING.

Two: Y U NO UPDATE?

Ah love this

PLZ WRITE MORE AND SOON :D its been awhile :( and i like this sotry soo far :D soo plz dont stop here !

i like this story(:

update soon(:

So um. Curiosity killed the cat, but do you plan on updating this any time soon? Not to rush you or anything but. You know. It's a good story and I'm waiting on chapter fifteen to see if Envy can actually swim, heheh.

Either way, it's a great story. Me likes.

:]