engaged? ALREADY? Stupid

Esme designed and decorated four houses... and THEN bought them? I don't get it.

What the fuck does Bella mean "finally kissing me for real"? Its been like two seconds since he kissed her, what is she talking about "finally"?

What is with the games anyway? Did you not have anything else to write about? Or do you think its cute or something? I disagree but then again Im not a fucking child.

Is Bella under the impression that she is being …..seductive? Cause Im thinking she's just embarrassing herself.

"Emmett overhearing was impossibility" Does that sound right to you?

And Bella playing fucking games doesn't really make sense for her purpose. How does it work? She teases him in front of his family by touching him and what? That will make Edward tell his family that they are dating? Shes a fucking moron.

Bellas "plan" to "break" Edward into telling his family that they're dating is fucking childish. And amazingly stupid. If he doesn't want to tell his family he shouldn't have to. And if Bella cant deal with that then im sure she knows where the fucking door is. Im not impressed with your version of her.

"He insisted that telling him family would alter our relationship for the worst" Forget the "him" for a second, does altering something for the "worst" sound right to you?

Bella is a fucktard and she just proved it. She sent Alice a thought...in front of Edward...thinking Edward what? Couldn't read Alice's mind?

Bellas responses are never what I think they should be. Edward says that his family will be talking about marriage if they tell them they are together. And Bella doesn't even think "why would they do that, weve been dating all of 5 minutes". She just says "let me". Shes just, too simple minded for me.

That whole conversation was so transparent. Bella acts like she has no clue that Edward likes her...yet she is constantly holding his fucking hand. How does their powers make them "like meant to be"? She can send out her thoughts and he can read minds, but not hers. How do they work together? And what a shitty power bella has. She can make people hear her...in their minds instead of with their ears. big fucking deal. And the blushing? That didn't even make sense.

Bella "loved meat"? She was a fucking vegetarian in twilight. But you thought it was important to change that? You think it adds to the story? LOL

Why would they put all the people with powers on one team? That doesn't really make sense. And I really don't like how close Bella and Edward are already. And Bellas passiveness is beyond annoying. Edward is on top of her and she just...lays there... all "come what may". Sigh.

Bella being able to send thoughts doesn't seem...like the right power for her, nor did the shield thing from the actual story. She was so boring and there really wasn't anything that stuck out about her except how whiny, desperate, and clingy she was. THAT would probably be the strongest trait- clingy.

That's a really strange cover story. As a matter of fact, its fucking stupid. And I don't understand it at all, why leave room for Bella to see her parents again? Any mother would notice the difference in her child right away. And that seems like undue exposure and risk to me.

So Edward only "condemns people to live without their soul" if their already dying?