Sorry I was a bit confused by the last chapter I thought Harry said he easy gay? But he married luna

I don't think Harrison is a good name for harry, Hadrian would have been better

I think that the story is great, nice plot, emotion, well written its amazing

Me gustó y creo que más por la mención de las encantadas, de verdad estuvo muy bueno... seguiré leyendo los demás...

love it and the Charmed Ones reference was a great touch. thank you.

This was an interesting story. It makes me wonder what the twins relationship with Bill and Charlie are now. Thank you for writing this.

Idk if I'm right but I got a strange feeling that Fred and George are Zach and Severus

Thanks for this story! Great plot and touching moments!
Sometimes the writing would look rushed, but I guess it's just a question of reviewing some stuff.
I loved it tho, congrat's!

He kidnapped a toddler, suborned child abuse, possibly abetted same, stole school funds, stole individuals' money, played power games with the Wizengamot and threw innocent people in Azkaban, knowing they were innocent. Who is to say he didn't set up James & Lily for his stupid prophecy? Dumbledore may not have wanted to be minister of magic, he did want to be the power behind the throne. What do you call truly evil? Voldemort may be worse, then again he wasn't hiding behind a benevolent mask.

Harry finally found his place...

Despite the grim start, this was a mostly happy story in my opinion. Beautiful rendition of some of the best characters of the books.

Thank you for the story!

-Winlyn

Really enjoy going your first stories, seeing your growth and creative energy, just fantastic.

Well done and thanks again for sharing.

Good story

It was slightly implied Harry was gay but I don't mind him ending up with Luna ( biased 'cause she's my favorite female character). I know it's cannon but Remus/Tonks confused me 'cause it was also implied Tonks liked Severus but I'm i guess.

Have you considered having a beta redo this entire story for you? The plot is amazing; the writing...you can tell it's one of your first pieces.

Great plot. I love your stories, but this could have been better written. Bad grammar, punctuation, spelling and typos and just plain using the wrong word which totally changes the meaning of a sentence. This blocks the flow of the story as you have to work out what you mean.