Ooh ma baaaaabbyy! All greeeeeeewn up. Kinda cheesy. But overall... Good!

Awww I loved it thank you for sharing

Yea but make Severus his father instead

great story! but i agree with your ending, harry is better be died coz the feel of this story is lack i think. it full with happy one, there many emotions but plain and not touching my heart so great. so if harry died there will be full emotion even just sadness. but.. okay this story is great too. tha k you for write this.

what surprise event, harry is deid. *sniff..* i kinda have feeling but not like this.

where sirius lately?

i wonder how draco have twins and she is Snape son, how biological possible? i kinda dissapoint Snape become potter, i prefer evanson, no need james dad fake affair excuse, how can it not smear james dad name? i am surprise harry suggest go along with dumby, i thought he gonna fully change this past. but it interisting, i like it

this is too happy ever after like fairy tail. it not bad but i prefer realism one but dont want have anyone died. amd Dumbledore, i prefer harry so something to him like comfort him and makes him understand than to be laughing stock in this story. just tell my opinion/advice.

glad draco is here and have better family soon. i am proud of future draco to save his mom in this story too. good job!

awww poor harry. i miss lil sev too and harry-sev father-son bonding.

please let draco born but then still sev x narcissa pairing.

it still weird to read good!bellatrix. Remus and bella huh? it new but i like it.

wow big surprise. kinda sad there no draco and teddy but this is no hari done so okay

poor hermione. i think Percy x Hermione is good now.

i kinda pity Lucius. hehe. i mean the prank is harmless, okay. but the time and is not. graduate is important day to remember and Lucius parent to him, well.. my wild imagination is telling me Lucius is like draco. boy who dont have choice, and gonna be punishment i. his home coz this. but.. haha i too serious. this is just fd