Reviews for Breathe
Ah-choo chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
That was a nice heartwarming story. It made me feel all nice inside. :)
Pen-Versus-Sword chapter 1 . 10/14/2008
Oh, lovely. I can see these scenarios happening before their confrontation with the Undying, and I can feel the finality, the timorousness, that everyone is experiencing in their hearts.

This was well written, and very touching. Thank you for this.
Lady of Balfonheim chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
This was a very moving piece, I am at a loss for words after reading it.

~Famke~
Cataracta chapter 1 . 1/27/2008
Awesome, an in character look into everybody.
kinky boot fiend chapter 1 . 1/20/2008
Wow.

Just, wow.

That was amazing, stunning, beautiful. I loved it, this tatally goes on my favourites.
Gweneal chapter 1 . 10/21/2007
I just bumped into this fic. I read it and I must add it to my favourites. I think that says it all. I just love the way you descibe everyone's feelings, and I this short piece of story really fits in what trully happened in the game.
Ane S. Thesia chapter 1 . 8/16/2007
Beautifully written!
Omskivar chapter 1 . 7/13/2007
This is one of the best FFXII stories I've read. Thank you for sharing it.
Pinku chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Very beautifully written! Seems very realistic as if it is a missing part from the FFXII game. The pairings are realistic too. Good writing style :)
Rehime chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
I liked this. Very emotional, but written well to convey all this emotion without overspill.

Good work.
Mariagoner chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
This is all very lovely and beautifully written but- given my wide-spread prjudices- I'm most in love with the section on Penelo. (And my inner Larsa/Penelo shipper gives one giant squee to her missing him, hee.) Oh, you break my heart with how well you write her and her struggles. Great job here!
ridorana.ao3 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
Intruiging. Beautiful writing, I could easily picture everything in my mind as I read through this literary work. I felt as though it was almost like a missing FMV from the movie, something that all of the characters were truly feeling, truly thinking that night before everything finally ended. You dug deep into sides of the characters we rarely saw, and how each one has changed since the fateful, dramatic meeting with all six of the warriors.

I loved the idea of the Strahl "singing" it's song to each character, making them wander through their thoughts, their pasts, and the people they have encountered and sided along. You did a great job, and I totally put this on my favorites.
Zaz9-zaa0 chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
The characterizations had me on pins and needles of awe! I love how the song interconnects with each thought and relation. :)
Mavellena chapter 1 . 7/8/2007
I think this is a really good one shot. Not too sappy, realistic and most important, the pairings I like too :P

I hope more people will review and say lots of nice things, I'm frankly too tired.