Hmm. Ianto and Martha. Never considered that... well written and funny. I've always wondered what the machines do, so it's good to know that the characters have no idea, either :P

Aw... YAY! I completely agree with freakazoid on how beautifully you set up their banter - it rang so very true to their personalities, it had me squeeing with delight. LOVED the comment about Jack joining in.. lol.. oh, so devilishly clever. *melts* After such sadness with Lisa, it warms the heart to know that the capability to love does not end when that love is gone. But it's the last line, the observation skills of Owen, that catches a grin and makes the day all the brighter. ;)

Aw... YAY!

Oh, please PLEASE write a sequel? Pretty please with sprinkles on top?

Hee hee - very funny and very in character! Excellent!

I love the conversations between martha and owen, the way you switch from "guess the partner" to "let's talk about dead body". Snarky perfection.

Oh wow

I loved it

Keep up the good work

x

aww niceness, ianto and martha lol. I strongly dislike Owen too.

I loved it...you've actually made me think that they would actually make a good pairing in torchwood!

Good story. Funny, in character. I liked it.