That was pretty awesome! Great job dude/dudet!

LOVE IT! Thanks for writing!

Good but an error in the last POV.

U put that Raven was grabbing robin's hand by mistake.

Other than that: 2 THUMBS UP!

We liked the story and we think you have potential in writing. The only problem we saw was minor: the jumping from POV to POV was confusin and drew away from the real genius of the story. We are interested in giving you a challenge. If you would accept, we'd like you to write another BBxRae fanfic with the beach a the setting. It has to be a one-shot but the lenght is up to you. We await your answer!

The Moon Writers (Violet, Ace, Bella, Damian, Eliana, and Derek)

P.S: cntact Violet at for details on the challenge!

Excellent one-shot. The T.V show should have used the "Raven tosses an offending team member out of the tower" bit. It is simply hilarious. I enjoyed this a lot. Well done.

Incredible. I was putting off reading this since the summarywas lame, and seemed fluffy. But this was absolutely great! You're writing is impecible!

Excellent one-shot. Nice job with all the POVs.

Keep the good writing.

Nice story

cool, nice story