THIS IS SO SAD AND SO GOOD! thank you!

Yea... i realized peter pan is a jerk wad...

Beautiful.

/.../

She knows that she left her heart behind in Neverland, and the Lost Boys play catch games with it, though their leader always wins. It gets dropped a lot; she can feel it. It breaksbreaksbreaks.

/.../

Just beautiful.

Oh. Wow.

You certainly are good at writing depressing stuff :)

Which works out in a really good way :)

Broke my heart into a million pieces.

sad, beautiful, and i loved it. :'D

thanks for the read.

Aww...

That's absolutely tear-inducing. Beautifully tragic.

this was insanely good. i wish i could write suff like this.

you're very good at writing these small selections. i read some of your harry potter ones as well, and they were also all very good.

that aside, i think this really shows the dark side of wendy really well. they never do tell us what happens afterwards, and this is one of the best after-stories of peter pan that i've ever read.

Seriously, I know you're probably so sick of hearing from me, but I just love all of your work! This perfectly describes Wendy...or rather, the Wendy that I see. Because I love thinking about the character when the book or movie ends...and if I were Wendy, my heart would breakbreakbreak. I love it. Simply, and utterly, this was perfect.

That's…really beautiful. And how I always felt about Wendy when I was a kid, a sorta morbid kid, I guess. How do you go back after…

I wish there were more to say, but it pretty well breaks my heart to read it, and let that stand as high praise and raving review.

it's so sad... loved the last line though.

wow. interesting. quite depressing but it's good, really. what you wrote, it's like it's pouring right out of your heart, like it's your heartfelt feeling about those two. keep the good job!

that just made me die a little inside, that did.

You're a very talented writer for this kind of thing, you know? You might want to consider writing something of your own creation, as in completley of your own creation, and getting it published. Even if it doesn't come through, ou have a very good shot at it. Who knows? Maybe one day you'll write a book that makes us cry as much as your stories now do, and you'll become a great author.

Just like the Harry Potter fic I just reviewed, this is simply amazing.

I love the way you write.

Lovely.