| Reviews for Falling |
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GeneralBlackShadow chapter 16 . 5/24 Please update soon! I really love your story and I simply cannot describe my impatience and urge in words. Please Please PLEASE UPDATE! |
GeneralBlackShadow chapter 17 . 5/22 I love this story so much and you can barely find stories like this. I really hope you don't stop writing. I don't want to sound critical and cruel but it shouldn't really take a few years to write a chapter. I will loyally wait for the next. xxxxxx |
catherinahawkins chapter 6 . 12/14/2018 the story is interesting but I don't like how Snape gets to be the bad guy |
Erica18 chapter 17 . 11/5/2018 Continue por favor. |
LadyLumiya chapter 17 . 9/20/2018 Amazing story! I haven't been in the Harry Potter fandom for quite some time but this story immediately pulled me in and has me wanting more of this parrying! It was incredibly hard to stop reading once I began and ended up falling asleep with my phone in my hand while reading in the early hours of the morning haha. Now onto my review! First off, I love the characterization. Each character catches my interest and I never breeze their dialogue or when their inner thoughts/intentions are being explained. Tom is my favorite. How can not be? He's changed so much since the beginning of this story and I'm so happy to see him becoming the human being/teenage boy and more relatable and not some soul split serpent demon man. I want him to experience love and emotion and not feel like he's alone in the world (because he's not anymore! He has Hermione, his father, and his grandparents). And I think that Hermione is not his weakness like how he believes but she's actually his strength. She's teaching him more emotions that he's never felt before other than hate, sadness, loneliness, and anger. Imagine what else he'd be capable of with his magic if he used love (because we all know love is the most powerful lol). The part in the story where he got worried over Hermione when she didn't show up for dinner so he went looking for her and then kissed her face all over when he found her safe... My heart! I was grinning like an idiot at my phone. I love see him being this intimidating, dark, emotionless man to everyone else but then to Hermione he gets all frustrated and soft and blushes like the teenage boy that he is and only she gets to see it. Love it. I picture Tom as the actor who played him in The Chamber of Secrets and hot damn that is one fine young man. Hermione you lucky girl hanging around Tom and Draco. Oh and love how Draco enjoys tormenting Tom and making him jealous. haha so smug. So the last chapter ended with Tom slumping in defeat to Malfoy who took his place as the "Dark Lord"... By saving Tom and preventing him from becoming the Dark Lord is resulted in another taking his place. They obviously can 't kill Malfoy or else Draco with cease to exist, so this is going to be a difficult matter for Hermione and Draco to handle. Honestly I can just imagine Draco walking up to his grandpa and punching him in the face and telling him to go home and get his act together haha. But here's a thought, I can't quite remember when the Order of the Phenix was created, but maybe Hermione and get a head start on that and start recruiting their own little group. But would Tom comply? We know he has feelings for Hermione but that doesn't mean he's a completely changed man and cares for muggles and such. So far we see that he stills craves power and enjoys having others look up to him and treat him with respect. He still has ways to go and I can't wait to see what all happens. Lovely story and amazing writing. If you ever need someone to talk to then don't be afraid to shoot me a message! Hope to see an update soon! |
utterlybewitched chapter 17 . 9/18/2018 I have recently become a great fan of the Tomione ship and after reading some very OOC stories and weird AU takes, I have come across your story and I must say, I love it! And you for having the discipline to continue it after so much time has passed - I'm in awe! Can't wait for you to update! Don't listen to the haters, they don't see a great story even if it is before their eyes! This is the Tom that we love and wish for - I sincerely believe that he can be redeemed through love, and Hermione is the perfect candidate to accomplish that! I anxiously await your update! You write fantastically and realistically! Much respect and love! -utterlybewitched |
musicbookie23 chapter 17 . 8/13/2018 Absolutely lovvvveeeeeddddd the way you have written the fic ... |
wolfiegirl83 chapter 17 . 7/17/2018 This is a great fic, it really sucks you in. I hope to be able to read an update soon! |
Lilian chapter 17 . 7/4/2018 Eleven years? Thats a damn long time to continue a story. I'm impressed! And really cute fluff :) |
Guest chapter 17 . 5/30/2018 Noooooo... oh please let Hermione and Draco come to his reascue. |
Guest chapter 15 . 5/30/2018 Omg I love everything about this story |
Ara Laufeyson chapter 5 . 4/12/2018 YAY! Tom has familie! |
lioness chapter 2 . 2/14/2018 hi i just wanted to know where you got the surname Buchanan from I don't know but when I was in Secondary School (I'm British) and one of our houses/founders was Buchanan. i just Wanted to know where did you get your teen education ( WHAT PLACE?) thanks |
Guest chapter 20 . 2/4/2018 Please pretty please continue this fic. It's amazing. Please consider starting it up again if it doesn't tire you out to much. |
dhawks69 chapter 1 . 8/24/2017 Looks like it has been a while. Do you plan on finishing this story? |