This is a great fan-fic...

I personally think Yamcha did cheat on Bulma, based on Trunks' revelation in the manga, but only because he could no longer find comfort in her because she warmed up to Vegeta in the ways you mentioned. IMO There was a fault on both ends and a fault in the relationship altogether, which you point out perfectly.

I'm glad to read a fan-fic that doesn't hate on Yamcha though. Nice work. There's some ridiculously stupid Yamcha-hating fan-fics out there...

This was a superb piece! Nice work!

AWESOME!

keep writing!

xoxo

alixia

I think its was a great fic to read and i think it fits in very good in dbz.

I liked it. Very interesting from the different perspective.

Wow.

I have never truly thought of this situation this way. Even if this story isn't meant to make peple feel sorry for Yamcha, I feel sorry for him anyway.

That was so sad. I feel really sorry for Yamcha. I really hated it when people write fics where Yamcha cheats on Bulma. Almost all the fics that I had read about V/B had Yamcha cheating on Bulma and I really hate that! Couldn't they at least try to be creative on how Bulma and Yamcha broke up instead of the usual. I don't even know why I'm telling you this since your not the one who's writing these kind of fics but I just fell like telling someone. Great fic, by the way.

well done. i really enjoyed reading it. i like how you tried to write a third person's side of the story of the whole bulma and vegeta get together. yes despite vegeta not showing it he does really love bulma, and the whole getting together was a gradual promise, and maybe it was just FATE, like you say.

Great story,liked it alot. It was unigue because you know there are so many b/v fic out there. I always wanted to know how he felt.

Wooh, nice one. There are so many Bulma / Vegeta fics out there, it's nice to see one from Yamucha's POV. Nicely done - two gold stars. _

Hey I loved this fic! I am a hard core DBZ fan. Got most of the videos including a few majin buu episodes. I haven't written any fanfics about it because, well, I don't know if I would be any good at it. So I'm sticking to writing Kenshin fanfics. I'm glad you wrote this. I always wondered how those two got together. _ It was great! Anyhoo, keep up the good work.

Fate is just a scapegoat for peoples fucked up lives. I think we can condense every B/V get together fic into one sentence.

"Once upon a time, Bulma realized Vegeta's dick was considerably bigger than Yamcha's. The End"

Very sweet and sad... I love Yamcha and I think that there ought to be more stories like yours out there, because he really is cool guy.

That was a great POV, Yamucha had adult thoughts instead of being portrayed like a little kid. That was excellent..Keep Writing! :)

am I suppose to feel sorry for Yamcha...oh boy give me a break. I love your story.

nice pov choice