This is progressing great so far! Hopes you update soon! Like, REAL soon. XD

Hiya, just finished reading your story so far, and I really enjoyed it.I hope you still plan on continuing it.

Gasp! Yet again, leaving a reader hanging. I can't wait for you next chapter. I like how you put in the details of Hao and Yoh's bet. I'm guessing that Yoh might want to punch out his brother's lights out to either win the bet, or protect his friend? I'm really curious to as what Hao will get if he wins. Please continue!

Hao is really blunt isn't he? It seems exactly like him to challenge Yoh about matters he thinks he's right. Again, you portray the characters perfectly.

How cute. The fight of a couple. Except, it seems instead of a two sided fight, it's like Ren's just beating Horohoro up. It's still adorable though.

I like how you portrayed the parts of Horohoro and Ren. But where did the "bloody" come from? Isn't he Chinese? Anyways, Keep it going. I'll review in the next chapter. My pen name is aicornduong if you see it.

for a second i didnt recognize the story with the changed title.

this is certainly taking an interesting turn, having the twins involved. and in a unique way too, all for a bet on theories of love and lust. and Anna is the chip! id like to see how this goes for everyone :) keep it up!

Whoa, it's been so long since I last read this story...gah, I can't remember anything that happened. Lmao. Anyways, great update, kinda short actually, but still good. D

YOU STOPPED IT THERE! How could you! PLEASE post it soon!

ShamanLover

- So cute. I'm loving it thus far. You have a very different plot, I find. I mean, obviously, there are feelings like in all of the fics, but you are portraying it differently and I really enjoy it. :) Good job.

ShamanLover

OMG~! If he wins then what? WHAT? Wow, I over-react a lot, haha. Anyways, update soon, this was a really good chapter, kept me at the end of my seat throughout the whole thing! D

Haha, im sure you updated this awhile ago...I just, apparently missed the alert -.- Anyways, good chapter, it was kind of confusing for me, but I think I got the basics down D I'll read the next chapter tomorrow, considering i gotta get up in 5 hours to work, haha. Good work...D Sorries for the late review.

Btw, It was fuuny...and odd with the whole Hao, Anna, and Yoh thing...that part got me really confused, especially with Yoh's feelings towards it all...D

lol, nice

"Well, uh, who needs to really? I mean, with a body like that..."

Ren is the one who said that, right? it was Ren, wasnt it?

absolutely priceless! i couldnt hold back my grin and giggle when i read that! funniest part, and i think it is the highlight of this chapter.

its sad that Anna switched to Hao, but it makes sense. no doubt i dont disagree with it. i just hope Yoh feels better soon

and ya, back to Horo and Ren now. im curious for whats gonna happen next, i just cant see it. but theres gotta be something, whether it be progress or not. and once again, im lookin forward to finding out in ur next update :)

This was... delicious The style is refreshing and for the most part, the spelling and grammar was spot-on. The pacing is good and quite realistic (because, really, I don't think Ren would suddenly go all mushy and "OMG I LOVE YOU HORO *grope*" like he's portrayed in some fanfics). Hope to see you update soon.

-izzy