Okay, I see all my mistakes already. Crap!

I thought you would edit what I had written, guess not!

email me the new chapter any time, not right now, coz I know ur at state fair practice/class thingy.

oh well, can't wait for "enimys or something like that"! I already know the resault of the story, but still...the "fight"

GR I said N Twain! ! ! !

Hey! Me again

n reveiws, STILL! GR

okay, sence you wanted me to reveiw so bad, here it is!

You need someone to read through the story that can acctually spell (Unless you count me, who will read through it any ways)

Also, I know you have lots more planned out for this story ( I wont mention how I know that)I think you should have at least gotten it to the firzst true day of work before posting ( ;) )

Hey! You wanted men to review.;

LOL

ME