Who was red trunks, who's face was purple?! I WANT TO KNOW NOW!

ah you are an amazing writer! the story line is perfect and amazing! and the end is aweome!

loved it so great awesome story:)

This story almost made me feel like writing again. Ha. Even though it's old, I still have such a soft spot for this pairing. Great work. 3

loved it :)

Hm. It kind of seems like there's a lot left to be said.

But this was great. I love the style, the effortless way with words, all the references - it was just really fantastic. EXTREMELY well done. Especially this:

What about that famous actor’s kid you were seeing in New York—that Michael guy? The one Tai used to refer to as the swap-meet gaijin version of Yamato Ishida? Are you just projecting those old feelings onto me? I’m not him, Mimi. Frankly, I’m a lot better-looking.

Seriously awesome stuff.

Oh wow, this is just wonderful! I go hunting for some fiction and I come across a true gem. :) Lovely prose and composition, as well as a wonderful interpretation of the characters. Your Matt is perfect. Keep writing!

Wow. That was the best one-shot I've read in a long time, and a Mimi Yamato to boot! I love your prose, very refreshing! This was definately not your typical choppy half thought up one-shot, and I thank you for it! Very well done. Keep up the good work! :)

Really great. Too bad it was a oneshot. Maybe you'll consider continuing?

This was a really great story, I love your writing style. I hope you write more for this pairing in the future..

ARE YOU GOING TO CONTINUE?

I have to know! I demand you do!

It'a such a good story, Mimato forever!

Excellent story. Well-crafted and written carefully. Your style is impressive and the descriptions were far from lifeless, instead some of the best I've encountered on this website. I'm anxiously awaiting more of your material.

-DI

Oh, I do hope you change your mind and decide you're going to continue this, or at least make a sequel! I can't wait to see what's going on here! Great Job!

~*~M&M Forever~*~