It's a very good story which kept my interest high. I felt the ending was rushed which may have been due to your writer's block. Still overall excellent read.

I'm glad to know you intended for thoughts to be italicised. You're right, it didn't sit well with me; I was even re-visualising the sentences in italics. Don't worry about the size of a chapter- believe me, I've read much longer chapters, and enjoyed them just as I enjoyed this one.

Great story so far. Excellent writing, great mystery, and good as a Harry Potter story- I say "good" because it's not what I usually look for in HP fanfiction, though I'm greatly enjoying this. I look forward to reading the rest of it!

Wonderful story. I really hope the sequel will be up soon.

This is one of my fave stories of yours. Well written, great characterization, mix of adventure/mystery/drama/romance. And I love the H/G pairing. Hot shower scene :D

still waiting

Brilliant - you had me hooked after only the first short chapter. It usually takes at least three for me to know if I want to continue with the story - I hope the remainder of the story is as alluring. Keep up the good work!

excellent

i love it!

hope you update the sequel soon!

Wow is honestly all i can say about your story! this was such an original idea and i loved it!

wow! This is amazing. I don't usually read fics like this but I loved this one. Can't wait to read the sequal. Just amazing writing.

So I love this story like no other! So glad you wrapped it up so well! Does this mean hermionen is going to be with Ron while he searches for the other lost Mages and guardians? Cannot wait! Great description and detail throughout and development of R/Hr, my ultimate fave couple. Great job!

Nice "ending." Love the last line.

Great, I loved your story. Unfortunately they are a lot of the good writers and jobs that keep them from writing there fic stories. Just keep it up, and write the next one, we can't wait.

Just read the last chapter again, it is great. I want to go b ack and read the entire story, but I want the ending first. I just feel it is left hanging. Are you going to finish and have you though any more about a sequal? Hope you continue writing soon.

ohh! cant wait for the epilogue! this was one helluva read..